Whoa, this was actually incredibly awesome :) I loved it. You're really talented at writing, quite the skill. Everything seemed to fit perfectly, every detail and word having a place. It's a writing style I envy, to be frank. You're really talented!

Do you have more... Cause now I need more. I love it, so much!

Taila xx
P.S "Bad Touch Peter," and "Pedo-Wolf," are so beautiful I might just cry.

Yeah crazy Peter! \**/

Awesome start! I love Stile's quips. You might want to clarify at the start what the time frame is, for informative / possible spoiler purposes :)
Another chapter please!

nice evil peter

I really liked this. XD

Update please ;)

I liked how this left off. It would be a very interesting story to continue. I am very curious about what exactly Derek understood.
ciao

I love it :)

That was great, I like the subtly of Peter's warning and what it suggested.

I like where this is going. I really wish you'd consider making this into a long story rather than a one-shot. You've got a lot of content that you can work with here to make several chapters.

Anyway, regarding this one-shot, I think you did a fabulous job at keeping Stiles, Peter, and Derek in character. All of the men acted exactly as they did in the show. Peter as a wise creeper who is always trying to teach his nephew a lesson. Stiles is always getting into trouble, especially with his endless talking. Derek always being quicker to act than think and somehow always remains oblivious to things until the point of the message is beaten into his skull. LOL.

Really great job!

well then. looks like yet ANOTHER one of your stories that will be added to my update alert list.

lovelovelove

Yikes for Stiles!

TTYAL,

ED.

Love the new chapter and can't wait for update soon :)

This is awesome! Please continue it! Don't let it end this way!