Oh my word, this story is so sad! But amazing writing. It's definetly one of my favorites. Great job!

The ending was so sweet, and the story was so dark but not for shock factor. It was realistic. I loved this.

This was amazing! Perfect portrayal of the realization of actions undone and the consequences, even in death of those who deserve it will you still feel they haunt you, it doesn't matter who you are or what the reason was. Guilt outweighs revenge. And Zuko! Wow I loved him in this! He would be the perfect person to get into Kataras mind and tell her what she needs to hear and what she needs to see in herself, and how she still managed through all of the hardships to make him fall in love with her :D brilliant!

This one-shot was absolutely magnificent. Your portrayal of grief felt realistic and painful. I'm not sure if you have or haven't read Shakespeare's Macbeth (you probably have) in which Lady Macbeth does exactly what Katara does after responsible for a death: hallucinating blood on her hands (Out damn, spot!)
Anyways, I loved this Zutara fic, and great job!

Oh, wow. This needs more reviews. Very powerful, very well-written, very haunting.

Aww.

Holy crap I love this. Beautifully rendered to the point of making any and all mistakes irrelevant. Lovely. n_n

Woah, that was beautiful, dark and intense! Really well written, and I can see this playing out if Katara actually had killed him. It was very in character and well portrayed, well done! :-))

Listening to Unfaithful be Rihanna while I read it is rather fitting lol. Good job!

For all Zutara fics covering "The Southern Raiders," I've never seen one where Katara actually killed Yon Rha. You wrote the characters very well, though the ending was a bit rushed. All in all, good job!

beautiful

This was awesome. Very powerful, and I agree that if Katara or any of the other children killed and had to face the blood they'd spilled they'd be traumatized.

Very nice. I liked this a lot.

Aww, nice sweet ending.

This was bittersweetly beautiful. Well done!