I loved this so much and hope you decide to continue it!

this was fantastic!

Interesting. Hope Dib's alright. Wonder what will happen to Membrane and Gaz.

This scared me... Why would you make a machine like that instead of just using chemicals?

I laughed at "earth-munchies and acidic water". This was too good. I loved it and I think you should make another one!

Xd Write a sequel! Im serious! I love random insane kinda dark but with a plot twisted smut. And i love the idea of Zim getting revenge and taking over the Tallest with Dib as a not exactly willing helper. It was brilliant even though there were plenty of spelling errors most i think were typos. So thank you for the post and i do wish you would add a chapter or a sequel but even as it is its great.

Very creative, please keep up the great work.

That was really hot. I'm wondering though what Zim would have had Dib do as his slave. I love what you've written.

This is amazing, I loved it. Job well done mon ami, you should continue this it'd be great I can tell.

Omygods lady!
This is the special kinda badass right here!
Dude, seriously continue this! Pleeeez? I just got into this fandom and ur story jus made love it
Update soon!

OOOH MY GOOOOD
Are you writing more?!
Please write more this is awesoooome!:)

Continue it. I WANT MORE! （）

This story was amazing. I was practically drooling the entire toime. the ending makes hungry to read more. to bad there wont be a second chapter, ah well