"Syndra sensually moaned loudly" No. Your choice of words and timing with said words is a bit odd but this is just a no.

Otherwise good story and good ending.

WAHA. ME GUSTA.

Only problems and faults I see:

...so they begin to fuck in the middle of a political match? On the Fields of Justice. Um. Moving aside from that.

You have several capitlization errors.

"Katarina loved the fields of justice. She always had."

And there is a constantly recurring error of you forgetting to capitalize "Ionian". But other than that, this is quite good, albeit the feeling of "i wrote this within a very limited amount of time".

Good job though. Looking forward to AshexTalon.

Excelsior!

I shall add you to the ever-growing List Of People Who Have Written a Lesbian Sex Scene At My Insistence.

Dat Katarina.