Hi, really love your fic so far. Hope that one day you'll get the chance to revive it once again. If so, I cannot wait until chapter 3. Great job!

Verry nice developement! I like your slow pacing and Im really curious of what happens next :)

This is great! I really like this story so far. There aren't many DE3 fics out there and even fewer worth reading, but yours is possibly the best written one that I've had the pleasure to read. I love the way you've written Jensen and Pritchard, as in character as they can be without repeating script from the game, and I feel you really portrayed their relationship well, without changing their personalities into something wholly different. You're a wonderful writer and you paint such a vivid, realistic picture with your words. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you soon!

I would love to read more of this. I enjoy how you've written them.

*spazzs* OMG its so good! I see you haven't added to it in like a year but I'm gonna sit over here and cross my fingers...

Great! Loving it so far, please continue!

I have to say this is the best Deus Ex : Human Revolution fic I've ever read, which is not so hard, they are not many, even less yaoi. And Also one of the best fic I ever read, and that is a little more of a challenge.

Get on your knees and praise the lord! I have found a fic that isn't full of fucking clichés as if I was reading some cute yaoi comic shit.

I like how you start to establish the relationship, it's slow and it flows, it looks like my technique (yeah well, mine takes about 10 chapters to get the first kiss, hooray for the holy flirtyness and smexy touches)

Another thing, it's rare to find another man yaoi writer. I'll sound sexist, but they are better at writing gay parings. I'm a man myself and I have to say, I sit way too much in front of my computer, repeating "That's not how this happens or how men behave" in front of fanfictions.

I see you started this fic about a year ago, I just hope you'll get to finish it because there is so much potential and quality that it would be a crime not to go on, seriously.

I love everything about this fic, the use of this Pritchard sentence, how he cried, how he got his ass beaten and Jensen's behavior, he shock he has realizing what Pritchard said. On my side, I believe he knew all that and repeated it in his mind, and he had more of a shock to hear aloud for the first time something that he thought had lock in his head and heart.

Poor Adam, he is so modified that it is easier for others to think "he's just a robots, he has no feelings" or just ignore him because he looks more like a statue to sit around. At least Pritchard can see he's still alive and his heart beats beneath his shell of skin and chrome, and the poor man spirit's lingers, torn in two. As they said to Adam "The body may heal, but the mind is not always so resilient".

They really don't consider augmented people as humans. The guy just get out of the hospital, he lost his love, and the first thing they do is put a gun in his hands. I see nothing wrong with that, it's not like he was fucking traumatized... Anyway, I'm getting away from the topic. I love your fic, can't wait for more buddy, good job

i like this. its good. hope you update (:

Oh my gosh i love this pls plss pls update soon !

Thanks!

Awesome! Keep up the good work!

*starts to scream with glee*
The only reason I didn't follow this story before was because I didn't think you'd update it, but you have and oh my...GOD, you're a genius!
10/10
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on a rating of 1-10 1 being the worst 10 being the best id hve to say this chap was a 132 :)

Its still amazing keep writing ! I dont think I told you last review but the detail you put in hear is wonderus, You seem to be good at making chapters long ( wich i love) keep up the good work and update soon pls!

-IDintFall4ULoveTrippedMe

YES. GO ON. FEED THE STARVING READERS.

On that note this chapter was lovely. :)

Wow I really loved this chapter. You're such a great writer, it's enjoyable to read. You also have much more patience than I do (I am too impatient to slowly build a romantic relationship between AxP. Not just them, but in most of my stories and in real life lol). Awesome writing, looking forward to more :) -smiles-