Did I just like something...non canon? Weird feeling. I loved their friendship and the way that they just fit but something was off. They both knew they were losing something special and neither wanted to, but there wasn't anything they could do.

Sweet. Keep writing

Oh, bravo! Very well done! I normally HATE Lily, but I found it difficult to in this fic. You do a very good job of portraying all of her splits in feelings which is very good. You also make her less of a horrible person, which is astonishing because she's still in character. There were a couple typos, but nothing that detracted from the fic :)

This is gorgeous. I love the dynamic that you've captured between Lily and Sev- you get the friends-who-sort-of-care-about-each-other-as-more-than-friends relationship dead on, and I loved reading this, as sad as it was. There were some beautiful lines, especially your very last sentence and the last sentence in the second-to-last section.

I got the impression during this that English isn't your first language, just from some of the prepositions and pronouns being off, and some turns of phrase being not exactly the way they're normally said, but it was something I had to double check in your profile to be certain. Overall, this was a lovely read.

I am so in love with this. Like a million times over. No, a million and two.
This is what I think a perfect Lily/Snape is. (I'm a canonhead, too, for the record.) It was so sweet and so peaceful and it had just that perfect touch of cute, wondering romance to it, bound with a whole lot of warm and fuzzy friendship. I loved it! So much.
The interactions were all just so... perfect, for lack of a better word. I love how you illustrated their relationship. It was so amazingly in character. Gah, I don't even fully know what to say except that I am in love. I'm going to run away with this and get married to it, okay?
Hehe. Anyways, yes. Thank you so much. Though kind of sad at the end, it was so heartwarming, to me. And I LOVEDDD this part: "She was absolutely in love with him. She didn't know if it would last - all she knew is that it was true at that very moment." The idea of Lily being in love with Severus for at least one single, solid moment.. so compelling.
You write beautifully, honest. Keep writing, dear, and thank you so much for making my night and probably my week in its entirety with this! I'll probably re-read it a thousand times x