Wait... OH GOD WHERE'S MY SAVE FILE?! WHERE'S NAVI?! HAAAAALP

Here is a list of things I like and dislike about this story.
Likes
1. It's not to rushed
2. It's quite vivid
3. The spelling and grammar are correct
Dislikes
1. The swearing and the fact Link is portrayed as a brat
2. The witch. WHEN I GET MY HANDS ON HER!
3. That it was so short. Please do more!

that was a cool story!:) u should make o e of zelda like tht:)

If that was a real story, halve of the world would be good. Also life lesson learned to me, necer ever caues ever again.

Nooooooo! Link you don't stand a chanes! Did you just here the lady? Come-in-sense cominses!

Wow... So, anything else?

That was very good but you should make another chapter where the spankings finish

nice alternate endings

Personally, I'm always going to see this as the true ending to this story, as no matter what Link has, he'll never beat an angry mother, especially one as powerful as Twinrova. And now she'll probably spank him for eternity, or at least until he becomes a "perfect child", which is not likely to happen. Bravo!

Heh heh, how adorable! And Link being allowed to fight Ganondorf was a nice touch too!

Please finish the story! It is enjoyable!

Just what link needs teehee, nice story :)

LOL! Link is such a brat!

Funny and cute at the same time. Thank you for writing this.