Ooh please update!

I like it! It's getting to the suspense! And awww for the last part, he so big and cuddly... And deadly

And I can't wait for the game to begin, it's going to be good deary it shall be good! Update soon!

It's really good! I would suggest splitting the different POVs into different paragraphs. It was kinda hard to read. Update soon!

seriously? the second to last line is exactly what katniss says to gale in the movie.

This story is great so far, I would love to read more hopefully in the near future

Awesome and mushy! It's always the blue eyes :) Shwanna and I love the story and can't wait for the next update, and Logan agrees. I like the plot tambein (don't make my taco)

Da da da the suspense continues can't wait till we get to the actual games :D its getting good!
P.s. I was too lazy to log in

It's really good! Update soon

The suspense, really then only makes me question how much their love for each other will be challenged in the arena! :D

Its really good looking forward to reading more of it.

Nice start to it

This is a good story might want a little more detail at the beginning but an overall good story

I like this a lot! Especially the narrative changes, it keeps the thoughts fresh and new. I really liked the dream too because now the audience is all like WOAH CATO CAN'T DO THAT and the reader becomes torn, and that creates really good conflict. I'm looking forward to see what happens later on!

Really good so far