| Reviews for Memory of Yesterday |
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AnimexFreakz 0.o chapter 17 . 9/28/2018 IT WAS SO GOOOODDDD! Thank you so much for writing! I absolutely loved it! Seriously? How did you even come up with such an amamzing idea for a story? Thank you again! -kitty |
Guest chapter 17 . 1/8/2018 Me encantó pero al llegar casi el final llore con el malentendido entres van y hito mi al partir a la guerra me encantó está historia es simplemente genial tenes un don para escribir |
Meggy-chan08 chapter 17 . 10/31/2017 I have read this a thousand times and it still make my inner shoujo go "kyaaaaaa" and fall forever in love with this couple. Thank you for creating this wonderful story! |
lakeya2700 chapter 17 . 10/28/2016 Great story, I love it |
Guest chapter 17 . 6/5/2015 I absolutely ADORE this fic. I love how you eased into the beginning of the story and just left the perfect amount unexplained. I was at the edge of my seat nearly screaming in frustration over all the near misses between Van and Hitomi and their reunion. I love how you dealt with her process of getting to know herself again, as well that the debate of her being a different person after losing her memories or not. I loved Folken and Mamoru and Hiigo and Naria and Eriya and Dryden and Gaddess and Gatos and each character you gave attention too. Character development was top-notch in the story for literally everyone, though I must give a special mention to that of Celena. Wonderful treatment of characters, with your original ones very endearing and the established ones staying true to how they would be. I've so much more to elaborate but that'll probably bore you. I appreciate how you didn't make Zaibach the ulmiate bad guy either, giving the country a means to realistically get back into Gaea's good books. The plot itself was fantastic and was treated so well, with very little predictablility and nice twists every now and again. Tender moments so tender I smiled, laughed and/or teared up more than I'd care to admit. I might be able to go on and on and on about how much I loved this fanfic. There are some pretty damn good continuation fics for Escaflowne out there and I definitely would count this as one of them. Your writing style is impeccable, save for a few minor typos here and there - hardly an issue. The only criticism I can offer is probably about the overuse of the word 'rotations'. While I understand the need to familiarise the reader with the term, it did get used quiite a lot, in places phrases like "a long time ago" would have sufficed. Overall: wonderful story, excellent characters and lovely plot development and writing. Rest assured, this won't be last time I read this one. Thank you for this! |
Guest chapter 17 . 4/2/2015 The best Escaflowne fanfic I've read... A nice continuation of the story. |
PearlAnn chapter 17 . 9/23/2013 awww... i just love this story so much! :D such a happy ending! :D |
thewildthingsarecoming chapter 17 . 4/29/2013 This was an amazing story. Really well written and just so so good! |
Transcendentalist Tangencies chapter 17 . 12/16/2012 This was awesome, btw! :) |
Arciere chapter 17 . 11/13/2011 Lovely. Simply beautiful and complex, and completely magnificent. I'm so glad that I stumbled upon this story. Every moment kept me hooked. Your writing style is lovely (there were a few typos, but I don't count that as bad writing) and persuasive. I couldn't keep from reading. While I was a little miffed with how long it took you to get Hitomi and Van together, I understood why. -Arciere |
Crystal Twilight chapter 17 . 11/6/2011 I loved this fic! |
waterbottleandpillows chapter 17 . 3/22/2011 A fitting end to such a fantastic story. :) It's past 3 am where I'm at right now but I couldn't care less. I had to finish your story, and well, I'm glad I did. The ending of Escaflowne left me hanging, and your fic just gave me the closure I needed. Thank you, for giving Van and Hitomi their well-deserved happiness. |
MidnightReader1 chapter 17 . 3/8/2011 Loved da story, it was great:-D Love Hitomi's brother n it and i esp loved how he got a happy endin as well:-) Lookin forward to readin more escaflowne stories by ya. Keep up the good work! xx |
M M Forever chapter 17 . 2/28/2011 A great ending to a great story! Thank you so much for finishing this; I loved every moment of it! |
Han-elujah chapter 17 . 2/20/2011 OMG! THAT IS HOW THE SERIES SHOULD HAVE FINISHED! VAN AND HITOMI FOREVER! XXXXXXX that was fantastic... if you didnt get my hint! have you made a sequel? (thats my second time reading the story... straight after re-watching the series...) |