Very interesting. There is a lot of emotion in this poem, despite the premise. (and a teensy bit angsty...probably why I like it so much) ;)

This is gorgeous. It just /flows.

holy this is awesome. This was one of the best things I have ever read, thanks (:

This is beautiful. Wonderful job.

I usually don't read poetry here, but I decided to give this one a go, and am glad I did. Very good job here, the show's quotes were nicely placed throughout. Nice.
Cheers!

Holy Apollo, you made a Sherlock fic!
Well done, doll, it was wonderful, I love the incorporation
of lines in the story.

This was ingeniously written, I love everything about it! The comparison of Sherlock to an automaton is smart, especially after John's "you machine" speech. Also, the way you put Sherlock thinking of Jim as a toy, like Jim thinks of Sherlock, was clever as well. All in all, five stars! Loved it!