great

so awsome

pppllleeeaaassseee update!

I don't normally have a problem with gender bent stories but I am sad to say that I just can't get into this story. So far the best story you have is a Slight Missunderstanding at least that is my opinion. I wish you could have updated it with at the very least 12 new chapters by now.

I know this story is dead, I doubt anyone will every see this, I just wanted to put this out there. Everyone always makes a big deal about how rogue can never be close to anyone or get laid, and that's simply not true. I'm not saying rogue can control it, or that there was a solution in the comics cause I don't know if there was, but there is a really really simple solution to the problem. It's called condoms, see its this magical layer of rubber that goes over a male sexual organ, but is thin enough not to interfere with intercourse. No skin to skin contact, no zap. If we're talking petting and fondling, foreplay and what not, again there are simple solutions. Asuming it's a male rogue all he'd have to do is wear a morphsuit. Make it really soft and satiny so it doesn't feel bad on his lovers skin, then she strips down and he runs his, thinly, covered hands over her. Cut a whole around the pelvis just large enough to permit hos member, put a condom on it, walk male rogue can have sex. Female rogue could be taken care of by reversing the procedure. A little weird yes, kinda an odd kink, but they can totally have sex. Only thing they couldn't do is kiss, no way round that that I can figure, and possible conceive a child depending on the powers interaction with sperm. Sorry for scarring anyone messed up by what I've said, but I just had to get it out there

Well, I doubt you will ever continue this story or even read this review, but I still like to give it.

You did an extraordenary job genderswaping the entire shows cast. You reall made it work with all the characters. Just with Rogue I cannot picture it fir some reason, but it's more because I don't see any diffence to the original self.

The charakter I like most is Emmett Frost. I always felt that the Evo Verse was lacking Emma Frost and you perfectly worked Emmett into the story.

I also never thought I would see a genderswaped version of Pixie. But you did manage to make Morgan even a little bit scary and not ridiculous.

So if you ever were to finish this story I would be up to it.
For the record, Storm can be really scary, so I thing that Sabres will be in a world of hurt and lucky to get away alive if Shango sees the guy who raped her messing with his girfriend. Than again, Logan is far from defeneless and not exactly a damsel in distress who needs saving.

Kudos
Jeanniebird

update please

At least it wasn't Deadpool

Hmmm, it looks like the Brotherhood is about to get bigger. I have to admit, I've always felt a bit bad for Bulk/Blob in this episode. However, you wrote it very well!

Yay, we get to see Rogue! I also like the psychological aspect you've brought into this story, it makes the characters even more realistic.

I really like Kit, he's a great genderbent version of Kitty! The relationship between Lady Wolverine and Sabretooth is also a good one for this type of story, it leaves some suspense for the future.

Hehe; Rogue and Kit interaction was soo funny! Especially parts about cigarettes and porno :P Well, maybe Xavier will really help him to learn to socialize with others... I wonder though if he will have as many conflicting views with John (Selena, hm?) as with Kit.
And Brotherhood party (and consequences) was amazing) As well as Charlene blackmail of Irene Adler. I certainly did not expect telepath woman to act... more like her old friend would do.
I look forward to Orion and Logan part.

Now I'm curious about the strip club story, I literally burst out laughing at that, and the exploding cigars did the same to me as well. I really liked the talk with Serena and Katrina, you wrote it very well and provided a little more depth to it than there was in the show. As for Magnetrix, she sounds just as formidable as Magneto.

You included an Iron Man reference!
For some reason I picture Mysterioss as Principal Kelly (when he looks like a normal human). It's kind of ironic really, since he doesn't like mutants. I also like these new versions of Scott, Jean, and Kurt a lot so far. The new codenames are great, you're right about some of them not fitting. I especially like Storm's new name, it has a very powerful sound to it. I'm excited for the next chapter, so I'll get to reading!

I like this concept; I've read some gender-bent stories that are more parody than actual story. However, you're actually writing the story without turning it into a parody, yay! And you're right, writing and reading gender-bent stories are pretty fun, especially when you're trying to get a mental picture of what they look like. This makes me curious about how you'll write Rogue, Magneto, and Wolverine.