Hahaha I knew I was right about naruto being a ghost and though I never said it, I knew he wasn't dead either. :-) I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon

Kasumi is the name of naruto's fictional sister in fanfictions...its also my user name...she is thought to have red hair...but I say its blonde

this really just gets better and better. its a bit weird how sasuke is becoming so attached to naruto over such a short amount of time but thats just the draw of naruto i guess. im glad things are becoming a bit better for sasuke now that narutos around but im worried about how he would react if what im guessing ends up being right. it would probably crush him :(

please update soon

Considering what Naruto is, I'm really curious about how he's following Sasuke around. Usually ghosts remain in the place they died or near something they have attachment to. I can't wait to see where this goes!

Fist of all, oh gosh, the author's note! You sweet, lovely person, you! You're so kind, thank you!
Now onto reviewing this wonderful chapter (though the warnings at the beginning terrified me a bit)! Ohmigosh, I was just sitting there imagining Naruto running around in a revolving door for several minutes, and I couldn't stop laughing! My housemate thought it was hilarious, too! And then Sasuke's like, "Stop your bullshit." I died!
Naruto and Sasuke are just so darn cute in this. I enjoy how Sasuke reacts to him. Their interactions were amusing; I love back and forth banter.
And then suddenly BAM! Angsty Sasuke past! I kinda screamed, I was so surprised by the sudden reveal at the end of all that. It really was a shock despite the warnings in the AN. Just the thought that Sasuke could have had a baby sister...ugh, rip my heart out why don't ya?!
All in all, good first chapter. I only noticed a few minor mistakes, nothing to worry about at all. Keep up the good work!

i loved reading this and can't wait for the next chapter...

is naruto a ghost?

i liked it and since you asked for mistakes there were only two, you used brake in the wrong way, it's supposed to be break but i liked it and i hope you continue.

I like this story a lot. Its very interesting and I'm glad itachi isn't the villain. That said, this story is fairly predictable. If I'm right then naruto is actually a ghost that only sasuke can see. Please update soon