ZoLu's relationship is really confusing yet reallllllyyyyyy strong.
and Luffy's lucky (in one piece world) is readiculous. mann i hope i can get that lucky
i rarely find story about this two as captain and first mate. and i'm so thirsty about it.
well thanks for the story.

Nice one-shot, i hope it become a two-shot in the future.

Zoro's pov is really interesting to read, it opens up this whole other dimension of his relationship with Luffy. I've love to read Luffy's pov on this!

yay i love the unspoken bond between zoro and luffy D good story!

This was cute
There were some run-on sentences. You kept putting commas everywhere.

Please...make it from Luffy's POV...i will be so glad, hehehe
Nice story,,and nice Zoro's POV..
Im a great fan of those..

i like it :) hope you make luffy's chapter :P

luffy and zoro, the best friends.. best captian and first mate... big loving family strawhats 3 love it

Awwwww...!

That's so a Great and Sweet way how he describe their Connection to each other and to Luffy...

That's so Sweet...! ;)

omg omg i sooooo hope you make another chapter! ESPECIALLY in luffys POV! 3 Kuyaaaaaaaaaaaa *fangirl melts all over the floor*

Nice. You mange to catch Luffy and Zoro bond very well. i would really like to see a Luffy version,:) Anyways great story.

I really like this

AWWWWWWWWWWW! That is so sweet of Zoro to think like that! :D
And yes,one in Luffy's point of view would be awesome! :D

Luv ya all,
Panda Bear. :)

Really cool. I can see this actually being his real thoughts. It was interesting to read and well written. Congrats on the awesome One-Shot