This was so sad, and very beautiful! Loved it!

AWESOME

Wow, this made me tear up. And I'm a cynical, middle aged female. Well done!

Great fanfic I loved it!

God! I ended up crying. Why is this so much difficult? Why aren't they together already? Why is it taking so much time? Nothing is impossible, right? Then when am I gonna see them reunite forever? I would give anything to get them together... Please God...

this is really sad :(
hope they will be together someday they don't deserve to be apart :(
Great oneshot you are so talented

Why can't I hold all these feels? TT_TT

I also thought it was too good to be true how leon found ada .
At first , when i saw how leon come up with the dance idea i found myself rolling in the floor laughing so hard while i continuously slapping my face so i wouldnt suffercate myself to death
Then when it reaches the part when ada said " i dont care , please wait for me , ok ?" . I literally throw down the phone ( as im watching the story on phone ) go take a shower , drink a cup of tea , eat 2 cookies , talk with my bother for about 5 minutes before i went back reading ... cuz obviously if i had continue to read that part without what i did for a break ... then i would have had a heart attack and instantly being sent to the hospital .
And when i thought it was all over there goes that part " ... i'll be there ... " thats when i decided that i should stop for the day and go do other things ... since surely a bath , tea , cookies and chat wont be saving me this time .
Sir total respect . SALUTE* TT_TT

Oh God... this "depressive-one-shots" ALWAYS breaks my heart... And, I just CAN'T see Ada crying! Dosen't matter if is in a fanfic, or in the game... this breaks my heart too. Leon can cry I dont care, but not Ada. hahahahaha I am still waiting the game where everything will change for her. Until there, i read fanfics...;)

This is a nice piece. I'm glad you ended things here with an illusion rather than the real thing. That symbolizes the reality of their situation and you put a good amount of emotion in this story. I'm gonna go read your other works now.

-Ann

Ohhhh that was so good! It made me wanna cry! It somehow hurts to see those two at this situation... But I still love it!

What a lovely and heartfelt piece. It's really heartbreaking to read, actually, because just when you think Leon's found Ada and they can have a peaceful moment together-they're torn apart by the reality that they can't be together. And then, to add another layer of melancholy, it's just a daydream. It's quite tragic, that they can't even be together in a dream, but also quite realistic both in the dream and not, given both of these characters' lives and histories. I suppose this story begs the question: do they even have a future? Could they ever work out, or are they doomed to failure? I guess that's up to Capcom, if they ever decide to conclude Leon and Ada's story, or us fan fiction writers. In any case-lovely story, and thank you for writing it.

This one-shot is quite lovely and despite the underlying sadness it had its moments of sunshine. I have to say you had me going, I actually thought Leon had found her, but those plaguing little daydreams always seem to be the only escape for those two and oddly enough appropriate- great Ada characterization!

This being your first one-shot I have to say in my opinion that it was quite a success, you should write them more often!

-B C

SO SAD! T.T

But I LOVE it! Your writing is amazing. There's such emotion in your words that it makes me want to read more.

Ohman those feels. Q_Q I'm crying in a cafe right now. This fic should come with a warning- do not read in public places. It was so lovely, you have a great style of writing.