wow..O.O that was dark and angsty and slightly beautiful and well written..it's like...exactly how i would describe Sasuke's relationship with Naruto...wanting to rip him apart and dominate over him...and how Naruto would do anything for Sasuke..this was seriously well written portrayal of Sasuke and Naruto! :)

FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK.

Who gave you permission to write something so dangerous? So, so, amazing. Sorry, I cant think properly. Theres no blood left in my brain. I'm coming back to this story later, probably again and again. My god man, woman? dont stop writing this stuff.

Ugh.

Daaaaaaaamn...
That...was so freaking...hot.
I think you should do one where um..Naruto "takes control". Perhaps as a sequel maybe? Just an idea.

Um that caused me to react, physically. I don't know of you are a BDSM writer, but f your not, you should be

...Amazing. 3 it.

... this was great... i hope you'll write a sequel... or a lemmon.. yeah a lemmon is good too :P