This is probably one of the best MLP fan fics I have ever read and I'm mostly here for Grimlock. This needs more praise!

Clicked here on accident. Was shocked at first but finished it. Came out better than had thought it would.

SO FUNNY. Brilliant job.

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oh-ho god! this is awsome! X'D

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Suave Grimlock!

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is-taht-is hi,-i'm-derpy&me-grimlock also-dr-wooves-fam-made-or-the-real-thin!?

will-ther-be-hi,-i'm-a-drpy&me-girimlock-2 in-the-works out-of-qstion

cool but you might want to restructure it
i had one of my fics taken down because it was in script form

OMG ) this is awesome. I am obsessed wih grimlock and love Derpy Hooves! I am also a Whoovian! This is the pinical of epicness and my new favorite story! Bowties will forever be cool... and Fezzes... and stetsons! I have a weird image of potatoes with four legs wearing sontaran helmets :o

Holy Crap, this was hilarious! Thank you for making me laugh on a day when I'm sick :]