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Chickenleg718 was my best friend. She said she based her story on me to help me come out to my adoptive parents. I did, finally the day she died. Thank you for this, it would have meant the world to her. If you want to reply, just email me or Pommahawk...

Hey Fraidy, it's Chickys brother. I only discovered this story again today, I would like to thank you for your kind words and love towards my baby sister. I'm sure she would have loved to read your story if the skin cancer had not taken her. Why must teenagers be taken so young? To reply, just email her old account. Thank you for the dedication.

I WISH THEY WERE COMING TO CANADA :( if anything, they should come to Montreal ;) update soon!

Aw, Carlos... Don't think your friends hate you... And I would definitely choose Carlos over Rocque Records! ;)

Loved the chapter, hope to see another update soon! :)

Please write more, and I'm sorry for your loss!
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I'd love to see Kendall, James, and Logan's feelings, from the moment Carlos runs out to what they feel when they find out he's been kidnapped. Great chapters so far. And sorry to hear about your friend. I just lost my step grandmother to cancer yesterday. It was really sudden too.

I am so sorry about your friend; believe me, we all go through a terrible loss, and I know how it feels. My grandpa died of lung cancer years ago when I was very young, and trust me you'll be okay. This was an amazing chapter, and take all the time you need to recover and update the next chapter. I'm so sorry.

Ah! I love all the Jarlos and I request more. LAWL. I can't wait for all the angst to kick in! You're a great writer, you and your sister. Can't wait for the next chapter; update soon!

Well, thank you for the shout out just for following the story :3 I do appreciate it and I do love this story already. The plot is intriguing and I can't wait to continue reading, which a promise I will, though I can't promise I'll review every chapter. I really do hate reading a chapter without leaving a good review but I'm always short on time. I'll read though! Just keep up the updates and good writing! :D

Ohhh it's so interesting I can't wait for more :D

Very solid start. Color me intrigued. These guys have a bond of friendship that many people in real life just don't have. I like that. I also like it when authors choose to write them with brother love over romantic love...gives me some hope that there is still such a thing as loving someone without the need to attach romantic feelings to it. Really looking forward more of this. It's very natural for friends as close as these 4 are to be protective if one were hurt, and I think that for one of them to me more protective or to feel more of the brother like connection would also be natural. Shaping up to be a very interesting fiction. Looking forward to more.