I love this. What a special little moment. Well done! Keep at it! :)

Oh my gosh... this was amazing *grins* I love how they're so close, great job :)

I loved it. :)

Awwww... Cuteness! XD
This is so completely adorable! I love L and Near's interaction; it's very sweet. This is a lovely little story. I enjoyed it very much. :D

This story was really cute to read. I loved the brotherly like relationship you created here between L and Near. Little baby Near needing comforting from being scared of thunderstorms because it reminds him of past memories is just a very adorable idea overall. I also really liked your use of onomatopoeia throughout the story, it was a nice touch. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Rose.

Adorable and beautiful! This changed the way I look at near

so sweet This was adorable.

that was beautiful!

Awww, this was absolutely beautiful! I just love the idea that Near does really look up to L, and that L does care for this charges.

Such a lovely thing to read. thank you so much for this awesome story!