As lead-ins to the next story go, this is good. Though it makes me frustrated that I'm going to be reading Kastiel's story rather than the continuation. No, that's not fair, but it's an honest interest in what's going to happen once they all meet. That's something.

The Emperor's Wrath, her brother the spy, and her twin sister the Hero of Tython. Wow. That's an influential family.

The nonchalance these two treat corpses with continues to baffle me.

Have you ever tried to write a review that you knew had too much to cover? Early on, the length of the chapters restricted a proper response to anything you'd written. Now that I feel I've finally got a grasp on the story, my incredibly poor memory leaves me unable to pin down the exact details I'd like to address. I can't say this is the best point to give a review, but it's when I've finally made up my mind.

As somebody who writes my own fics, especially for the Warrior, I can't help but compare in my mind. In that vein, I think you've come up with a great telling, and certainly better than what I've managed to put together. The length of your chapters lets you tell the full story of SWTOR without getting bogged down in points that are unimportant. Staying loyal to the concept of two characters traveling together at any given time has let you focus on relationship development. Branching out with your character's backstory gave you just enough freedom to tell the story from a unique angle.

The romance and Jaesa's fall. Both are fleshed out well here. Quinn's desire feels appropriate to the magnitude of the Dark Side's influence on the story and you've done a good job making sure we know what they see in each other. Jaesa... I don't think anything could make Jaesa's fall feel truly natural, since we don't see enough of her leading up to the climactic battle, but I think it's important that the manner of converting her reflects the inherent motivations of the Warrior who does so. Because of how the story was told before this, there was never any doubt of how Lusiel would argue her case, only how much Jaesa would resist.

I'm mostly satisfied by this story and I'm impressed you worked on it for four years. Being partway through my own similar project, this one gives me perspective and reminds me to keep going.
-Karla

Interesting change on this scene. You softened the assault but then went into more detail on Baras' manipulation and its effect on Quinn. I like it and even though the "sexual" attack was lessened it still was hard hitting. Somehow though it doesnt feel quite as much of a gut punch as the previous one. I dont know. I am loving the changes but am uncertain completely on this one.

Loving the changes! This chapter is a duplicate of 63 though

Chapter 26 in this new version is actually the wrong chapter. It is not the confrontation with her mirror but actually a much later chapter where quinn is tinkering with the engines and jaesa and vette quarrel before they are interrupted by broyscs call. I hope you didnt lose that chapter!

Cant find update. :(. It says it was updated! Love me some more quinn love

This is still my quintissential quinn/sith warrior romance story anywhere on the net. I hope one day we see more of Malavai and Lusiels offspring but you just nailed everything with these two! I love this story and am back for my 30th? 40th? Read through? Yay! Love lusiel

I'm in love with your work!

Okay, I'm not usually one to write reviews of stories I usually read on here, but I just had to take the time to stop and write a review for you. I wanted to say thank you for writing such amazing stories. I will be the first to admit that I was able to lose myself in your writing for hours on end as I read about your warrior, Lusiel, and your bounty hunter, Kastiel. They very much make me want to reroll a warrior and bounty hunter just to experience the story lines for them again, despite the fact that I already have each of them at 60. The way that you integrated your characters into one seamless story really makes me applaud your imagination, and gives me something to try and work up to. Please keep giving us these amazing glimpses into your characters lives and personalities, and I will most happily keep reading about them.

Raina

just fucking good story!

OMG LOVED IT hoping femsmuggler corso also hoping u do a femjediknightxdoc thought doc is a great granson of attonxfemale exile

I was reading until I came across this line:

' She'd joked to Quinn, "If anyone ever asks me to purchase a residence here, I plan on gutting them with my lightsaber." '

Well since 2.9's out in August with a possible Tatooine residence... A future reference?

Excellent writing though!

I've read this story at least three times (this time will make 4) since I found it last year and I still cannot get over how well you've captured the personalities of each character. Every action and line of dialogue I can picture companions saying (with the exception of Vette sleeping with Khy. That did seem out of character but I've never done the dark version of that quest.) Thank you so much for sharing your universe/legacy with the rest of us. :-)