This is such a good story! Are you ever going to finish it? I at least want to know their reactions when they finally figure each out out!

update?

I'm loving this story to itty bitty pieces! I sincerely hope that you finish it.
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Wonderful story I was hooked from the start and even though I know it is on pause at the moment I hope you return to it soon I'm not usually into the kind of story I expected this to be but I was pleasantly surprised by how great this story is

Please update! Far too long ago was the last update.
By the way I cheer for Lysella to become fae Queen and for Sarah to kill her father (preferably after a healthy dose of torture, he has to suffer to learn some manners and I believe that he would beg oh so prettily).

Awesome story! I like the interaction between Sarah and Jerth. I like the build up. I wonder will Jerth figure it out first? I hope so. I also feel sorry for Sarah. Her father needs to be taken down a noth..I hope Jerth is the one to do it...Also, once Sarah marries Jerth (i hope) will she become immortal or Fae? Thinking Jerth is also powerful..until next time... great story. Its different.

update soon please

No! You can't stop there! We were just about to have the big reveal. :( I'm really hoping that someday you continue this

Hmmm... Lots of Jareth and Sarah banter, you say? That sounds lovely. I hope you update soon.

Please! Please! Please update! I love this story!

are you ever going to finish this

Your story is extremely interesting and very well-done! I wish you would continue it when you get the chance :)

I do hope you continue this. I haven't had nearly this much enjoyment in a fanfic in a while. This is just the type of story I could sink my teeth into. I'm eager to at least see Jareth and Sarah meeting under their proper titles for the first time. Poor Sarah she's going through a lot. Great story so far. I love how you've authenticated everything with lovely dialogue and wording. The descriptions and prose alone make it very alluring. I'm enjoying the interactions between Sarah and Jareth particularly. I love how you play off Sarah's spirit but with enough respect to her title. The others characters are interesting as well. Love the moments between her and Toby particularly.

I think that Jareth will no doubt wish to wed Sarah once he knows she is the princess he is courting. I want to see how you handle her would be suitors. But I especially want to see a direct confrontation between the two. With strange suitors with wicked schemes and intent. Along with Jareth who will no doubt try his best to covet Sarah's attention as much as possible. Although I see her being rather irate about him keeping his title so thoroughly hidden. Yet she has no room for feeling lied to since she has done the same to him. I almost want him to learn she is the princess before she does.

Please continue sooner or later I realize this story is on hiatus but I still so much potential in it. I wait patiently and ever hopefully for this stories potential return.

Nooooooooooo, please update! I really enjoy this story!

Please continue! I cannot wait to read when Jareth and Sarah realize who each other are.