Can you please update :(. I want to know what happens after that and just when Jellal meets her again. I want Jellal and Lucy to reunite. Plsss update. I love the way you wrote this, and I’m hoping to see more of it.

I wish that you’ll continue the story

Please write more I have to know what happens to Jellal and what will happen to Lucy from now on please continue writing.

What's going to happen next?! I need to know! Please update! You can't just leave it there!

Update!

This story is incredible! I am crying right now and it seems like I won't stop for a while. It is so sad and full of tension and I just can't wait for the next chapter. I beg you with all my heart please continue with this fanfiction! Bless you!

You can't leave it there and not update in 2 years! I need to see the guild's and Jellal's reaction! What will happen when they see each other? Will Jellal still care for Lucy? What will happen during the Eclipse Gate? I have so many questions! I need you to update! Please! I'm beginning you to update! This story is so good! Please update!

Poor lucy. Have to suffer.

Love love love this book! please write more awesomeness;P

OMG I can't wait till the next chapte it's amazing

Loves the story, just WRITE MORE

wooow I loved the chapter, I hope the next chapter with many cravings, take care by bye

Oh noooooooooo
Oh, poor Lucy.

i have to say though, that this is gorgeous. I love your writing style, and the plot for this.

YES! See? I told you that mysterious white being was Loke! He might have fooled them, but not me, or Lucy, or dumb-dumb (kinda).

Blah, blah, blah, Mustache King, blah, blah, blah, 'You opened the gates of your contracted Spirits inside of yourself', blah, blah, bla-! Wait...

She opened them INSIDE of her?! OK, give me a minute to let this all sink in...

Huh?! Nope. Not sinking.

Blah, blah, blah, Mustache King, blah, blah, blah, 'be united with the Stars', blah, blah, bla-! WHAT!?

She'll become a CELESTIAL SPIRIT?! (Why do you keep blowing my mind? It's not funny, dammit!) And she's agreeing? Well, I guess she doesn't really have a say in it. Does she?

Wha... Yup, all the surprises in this chapter have made me immune. So all you're going to be getting from me is either "Eh" or "Meh", maybe both because I'm not completely heartless. ;)

Nothing happened with Jellal - not that I (we) know of... Natsu is an idiot, so I don't care. Now Loke's in the equation?! Great, more competition. Looks like Star boy needs to up his game by actually SHOWING up! And don't expect to show up in your "Siegrain" get up either. And under no circumstance do you decide to pop up in dream sequences. (That's such a cliché.) Pinky and Lion Cub already made an appearance, so what's he waiting for? A standing ovation? I hope he's in the next chapter (which I'm sure will be up soon - I hope.) and he'd better do a good job of explaining himself. Hmph!

Ooh, the big scary Dragon Lady is here to save the day! I like her. A lot.

Hold it. They unlocked Second Origin?! That means Jellal and Crime Sorcière are here, somewhere... Why the hell didn't Jellal do anything?! Why didn't he look for her, or something? Did he even know...? Or is he playing that stupid "I'm so tortured and plagued by my darkness" act (give it a rest, Jelly-Man, it's getting old.) that he thought better to just leave her without so much as a goodbye? Drama queen...

Ah, the first signs of guilt and it had to take six years to mature - well, this is Natsu we're talking about - so he's right on track. But what the hell happened to his gung-ho attitude, huh? "Must find Lucy" wore off faster than I thought.

And the mysterious white Spirit that dumb-dumb knows is...? Loke! Who else could it be?