In the end, the grammar needs to be fixed. Not only that, the author's thoughts should never be posted in with the story. And lastly, the constant changing of POVs is irritating and I got tired of It real fast.

I say improve grammar. That is all; going to go read your other chapters.

OMIGOD AHJFNCJJFKDKFMCJMCJDJ

AHHHHHHHHHHH TOTAL FANGIRLING

have fun road!
XD

Oh shit Lena's Gona be pissed hahaha Allen you lucky bastered hahahaha oh man 9.9/10 for this chapter haha I'm still laughing

I support RoadxAllen 4ever :))

I really heart this chapter! *TheMidnightLuna*

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this brilliant one this chapter fascinated me sincerely go road it is the best, lenalee really in abundance it goes with lavi

Hehe I loved this story

Nice chap plz update soon

yes but do to my ignorant and impatient nature, i skipped to chapter 211. (i watched some subs,i usually don't like the subbed and prefer dubbed, but the voice suits Allen well.

Aw poor Road and Allen. Who cares about Lenalee go with Road, Allen! I seem to only like Lenalee when I'm writing Lavi x Lenalee fanfics. Anyway this is not gonna end up one of those 'your a Noah and I'm an exorcist, so bye.' things, right? I really hope not. But seeing the next chapter title it maybe so. But there maybe so hope left in the sequel. Can't wait for more! This chapter was so depressing.

P.S.- Have you read the recent manga chapters at all? Or have you only seen the anime? Cause it's getting really good, if only the chapters didn't come out every two months.

awe this was a great chap plz update soon