What a great story, you made everyone so real and believable. Renee was an absolute corker of a character, when she dismissed Heidi... LOL. :-) I haven't been able to put this story down, I just had to read it all in one go. Fantastic, thank you for writing. :-)

I'm with Edward, nothing wrong with socks on in bed, can't stand having cold feet.

OMG Bella is such a whirlwind.

Ohhhhhh, poor Edward, but really she wasn't the one for him.

Enroll Edward in a mixed Martial Arts Program!

Well... Where to begin! I loved these two- Bellward... How you portrayed the character of Charlie like someone greater than Steve Jobs and other, and then we have Renee *eye roll* who just makes me want to strangle her, is pretty amazing! I love the nerdy Edward and how Bella stood up for him. Oh, and the misunderstandings! Lol... Too much fun. Thank you for sharing.

I loved a good chocolate sandwich. Especially the one they made at this junction near my classes. I haven't had any in 3 years.

I have loved this story, but this chapter has so many things that don't make sense because you haven't looked at what you have written previously.

For example Edward took his shirt off when Bella got out of the pool. Then Bella took it off Edward and throw it a cross the room.. But the big one is the ring. Firstly she wouldn't have a tan line in the winter after a week. You had her taking it off to give it back to Esme, but then Edward had it in his pocket to propose.

Thank you:)

Loved seeing their future.
So happy tanya didn't win.

Charlie came through.
So happy.

Tanya is an evil bitch.
I hope they get what they deserve.
And I hope bella believes Edward.
Esp with everything that's happened after.

Its not want it seems.
Esp after what we heard.
If only Victoria got to tell them.

Tanya needs to give it up.
She has lost him for good. And she only has herself to blame.

Charlie is good for something at least.
But bella will be mad.