Just realizing I should have reviewed this when it was new. Excellent little addendum, just the kind of think I could imagine as the post-credits vignette at the end of the movie version of "Rain on the Just".

Love it! You did very well with your writing and the way you went about the story, but the biggest part of it, i thought, was the new set of conflicts you seemed to introduce...Do i see a sequel beginning to form for the near future? ;)

Oh, now that's just cruel. Now I really want that sequel, a super villain team? Come on!

...Who was that!? (I hope the site doesn't erase part of the punctuation. It'd ruin the effect.)

"Private organization" - supervillain alliance, or something very similar.

Intriguing, by which I mean, this has the potential to blow up like the proverbial powder keg - and Megamind and Roxanne are standing on the keg. Meep.

Oh wow this was the perfect addition to Rain on the Just. Of course, now I'm sitting here practically screaming for a sequel. Not sure why, but I just assumed a sequel was going to happen and that it would involve the Doom Syndicate. And now I see that you aren't sure you'll write one at all.
I hope you do. I know there are soooo many people who are hoping you do.

Anyway this was great. I loved the glimpse into the aftermath for Owen and the whole thing just had so much tension. I was figuring she wasn't just any old caseworker.

Hot Flash is such a BAMF! Rain on the Just was an amazing story, and I loved this little addition. :)

Haha, Hot Flash is a nasty ass woman :D always love seeing more work from you, I hope it's not the last!

Nice to see that you posted this on here, too... I know you still aren't sure if you'll continue in the "Rain" 'verse, but I sure hope you'll consider it. Because we all love love love it! :-D

Ha YESSSS! Just finished reading Rain on the Just today and now you put out...what would be an after credits scene maybe? :) A teaser for a sequel. God I'd have to say I'd love that, a sequel I mean. You just got the whole megamind universe spot on. I'd love it if you continued it, and this possibly hints to a group of villains opposing him. Maybe the Doom Syndicate? ;)