I think this portrayal of Sirius is very unrealistic. He'd never be mean or cruel to Harry. It's well established he loved him.

Can't Severus and Sirius end with each other ?

It was bad move, informing Dumbledore about the existence of Sasha. I mean you can just showed Sasha's dead mate's body and say that basilisk is dead and get it over.

Severus' twin appears to have helped him be a little more ... balanced? if that makes sense. Like, he has someone who is on his side even after Lily goes to the Marauders side.

I'm really sad that Sirius isn't listening to Harry and is instead just trying to spite Severus (the chief victim of the Marauders, right?) and his twin :(

I hope that Harry is able to come back soon, and that Remus is better at looking after Harry.

Also - I'm sad that Severus and his twin are basically being physically threatened by Sirius in their own house! When Severus and his twin had to pause just because Sirius reacted badly to Severus moving to pick up Hissy, it reminded me of hostages in a bank robbery situation - essentially 'this guy has a gun to our heads, let's do everything we can to keep him from firing it!'
Not a pleasant situation to be in :(

Thank you for writing and sharing this story!

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This was awesome and I loved the storyline I look forward to reading the sequel keep up the great work

Love this story :)

Fawkes is a bit... flighty, isn't he?

I was all set to crucify the old man but... you managed to completely change my mind...

I love how you made Harry very intelligent yet innocent and childish at the same time... It is a hard act to pull, in my opinion

that was cute... too cute lol

I think Tonks is still not even at Hogwarts... If I remember correctly, she was still in school in Harry first year at the least.

I hope they know to clear out from spinner's end

Is there some meaning to the form her patronus takes?