One of the best DW stories I ever read. Bravo. Very good twist and story line. Really bravo.

(during the Time War discussion) ...THE LOCK IS OPEN I AM A MORON. The TIME LOCK IS OPEN.

Wait
THE TIME LOCK IS OPEN
OH FUCK

Ah. Victorious. I thought I recognised that insane rambling.

Doctor, hitting his head against the wall: I, Hate, Everything,
Tonks, finding him: Are you okay?
Doctor: What does it looks like.

I'm sorry, Matt Smith writes- what category and do we know where to find it.

OH GREAT THE CRACKS ARE HAPPENING HERE TOO THEN

Found this story and was fascinated - brilliant and well written. spent two days reading it absolutely engrossed then... total disappointment of the ending and how bad it was compared to the rest of the story... no rhyme or reason for the Rani to pop up and kill Tonks ... I thought 'Oh hell no - what next, Duncan McLeod runs in and chops off a few heads then Flash Gordon kills Duncan and Buffy kills Drac and Ming the merciless kills everyone..." Totally enjoyed 60 chapters then it was like - Ha Ha Ha Gotcha! You were expecting a good ending and I'm going to leave more questions than answers! Go to the library and rip out the last pages of the books - I'm sure that would annoy less people...

What an amazing story! Stories? Novel length, season of adventures?
Truly a wonderful piece of work. You crafted an exquisite tale worthy of our favorite Doctor that certainly rocked (knocked) the Harry Potter Universe right off it's axis! Ten was the perfect combination of angsty, energetic, sometimes bordering on bi-polar, mad man we all know and love. He also happened to be one of my favorites, and you've brought him to life for me one more time. I loved the interactions with the Master (always a fun spice to the events of his life). I also really enjoyed the Corsair. He was very well crafted and the idea of him being Sirius Black fit so nicely. It now makes me think of a raggedy Gary Oldman floating around space in the Whoverse before his end.

The only bit that got a touch muddled for me was Rani as Bellatrix and her final stand. For the entirety of your fiction, that one part tossed into Ragnarok episode seemed rushed and not as flushed out as everything you've done previous. A brief description of Bellatrix more sane and more through in her evilness felt like exposition to justify the next monkey wrench in the Doctor's crazy life. Was an interesting turn of events that was over before it began.

That being said, it didn't detract from the work as a whole. It was well written and planned out in beautiful story arcs that, even if they had to retcon themselves, fit the Doctor's narrative. I also very much enjoyed the ending letter to Mickey. It was very much in Eleven's style. Though it wasn't his story, you kept The Doctor through to the very end which is no easy feat. I applaud you and your writing! Thank you for sharing your work! This has been a wonderful adventure!

Cheers!

Just pointing out. The Doctor asks why year it is when in the last chapter he had already figured it out.

Dude. I just realized that your fic is nearly as long as the whole book of Deathly Hallows. My respect for you has increased tenfold.

"You are welcome to torture me! Sontarans do not break under torture!"

Love that part

How is the Master back? He was pulled into the Time War with the other Timelords in The End of Time.

Y U DO DIS 2 MAH FEELS MAN

Sorry to be that guy ha I love the story to be honest i'm just bad at doing in depth reviews, I just wanted to point out that its called the resurrection stone and not the rememberance stone. I know not a big deal but it bugged me.

This is the first Doctor Who fic and the first crossover fic i've ever read and I love it! I'm just sorry I don't have the chance to review every chapter as I don't gave internet when i'm reading this, generally I save fics and read through them but still your take on the barty being the doctor theory is the best one i've heard yet.

Not sure why I never thought of him using the watch and the tardis being behind the love door was honestly a stroke of genius on your part, i loved that.

Hopefully i'll get to review again before i finish this but if not I just want to say thanks for the wonderfully story and keep on writing :)