Hi there! I see you haven't updated this story since 2014, but is there any chance you'll continue it? I absolutely love it so far and can't wait to see how Bones is going to react to Jim's latest escape plan haha Brilliant job capturing the personalities of Jim and Bones, and I'll definitely check out more of your stories if you have some! :)

This is pretty awesome! I love the characterization and story telling!

Please tell me you're going to finish it? I'd be really disappointed if not. Got to know what happens next!

Hi! I want a new update please. That a good fic.

" Painful to read"... I think that you have brilliantly captured the characters of Kirk, and Bones, including their unique, and winsome sense of humor! May you finish this story in the near future!

I am so enjoying the great heart, and soul with which you so aptly convey the deep, loyal bond of friendship that Kirk, and Bones share!

This is probably one of my favorite star trek stories, u've got bones and kirk's characterizations and voices just right so every once in a while I always come back to re-read it! its been a while but if u feel like it or have time it would be sweet if u updated

Please continue!

This story I'd great! Can you finish it?

This must be updated! It is amazing, but then again I have a... possibly twisted obsession with hot guys and them getting hurt, sick, etc. It's a guilty pleasure...

You write Hurt Jim well. I hope to see this story continue. :-)

hey elegantghostthis story is great! classical whump! hihi. A thrilling story mixed with the POV from kirk, who is so much confused! I like this writting style! what happened with the enterprise! why is this all happening! I hope, an explanation of these strange events will be part of an update, which you maybe can write in the near future? I would be very pleasedthank you. ps: I just re-read your one-shot story of the fiction-factory...gorgeous!

Please please continue this! Ughhhhhh you're so perfect, you mustn't be selfish and keep this perfection all to yourself ;)

Holy shit my dude, its been 2 years where u at?

For my sake ;-;

Please, could you update it? At least so far that it has some sort of workable conclusion? I love hurt!Jim, too and am a sucker for (hopefully happy) endings... Thank you so much in advance, Jo