Ahh, this is still one of my all time favorite fics. I remember waiting for updates years ago. So glad I found it again.

heyhey
will you still update? i really like your story :)
LG

unusual story with a very captivating plot.
i love it!

Law x kidd is the best pairing ever.

That chapter was just so perfect.
I, again, loved the smut sooo much. The fingering was just unbelievable hot and I can totally understand why Kid felt satisfaction just by reading that part over and over again. I find the way you describe possessive Kid just so very attractive while keeping him and Trafalgar still in-character. The cunning of Trafalgar is both impressive and so very fitting to his character. Extra Kudos for you just because in-character describtions shouldn't be taken for granted in the fandom.

And may I just add how hilarious the second half of the chapter was? My favourite part (outside of the Kidlaw smut scenes, which honestly take the cake) of this fic would probably be "as they made their obscenely graceful exit". And the phrase "Dr. Trafalgar had once again escaped from his clutches, and rather fashionably at that." I literally laughed out loud. (Good thing I was alone while reading this or I would have gotten strange looks, because I was just so thrilled and giddy while reading this. ) I already read all available chapters at this point, but sometimes I just return to this fic for this magnificient chapter.

I know it's been quite some time since you update, but I have to say that this is probably my favourite fiction of yours. I'd really appreciate a continuation.

This...was simply beutiful. I felt so excited and absolutely loved the hot Kidlaw smut scene.

Hey, I've like reread your story like 5 times and it's really one of my favorites! But already a year has passed since the last update... are you going to continue it? I really hope you do!

This is so amazing i hope you update it soon. I love it so much I'm going to cry

I just reread this fanfic and my favorite scene is the fountain scene and this. There's no words that can measure how much I love this chapter! I can't thank you enough for writing this amazing story!

Your spell checker has done you no favors, here. Or maybe you "write" using voice dictation? Whichever, I have a couple more word replacements that crept in.
"Bridal" instead of "bridle," "amide" instead of "amid."

More word mixups- "aide" (the person) instead of "aid" (the act.)

Thank you for writing!

I noticed this last time I read this- and you may never return to this story to fix it- but several times, in this chapter and others, "peasants" (common folk) is given as "pheasants" (long-tailed game birds.)
I tend to snicker when I read it, but since it is almost certainly an error, I thought I'd report it.
Thanks for writing!

JUST FOUND THIS STORY TODAY...GOD ITS GOOD. I just love your depictions of Law and Kidd. You're an amazing writer XD I can't wait to read the rest!

This is really good. At first I wasn't sure if I would like it, but I love it now. You are a very talented writer. Please keep the story going. Sincerely LPC

This is so interesting as the same as hot and more interesting (?)
i want to continue reading this amazing storye uvu

Thank you for writing and sharing this
I hope you'll update some day xd

Ciao