cooleo man! epic story! it like, totaly rocks! yeah anyway great job plz conitue to write

Since I don't watch Naruto, I have no idea what's going on, but this was entertaining. XD

nice story cool twist

I liked this, a different twist to the story.

SasuSaku rocks!

I know I really don't deserve saying this, but I wish it could've been longer. I felt like when she was doing the whole assault fiasco on Sasuke that I didn't know what was going on. It might've been too fast(believe me, I'm no genius at action myself), but the concept, title and summary were strong and your style was showing through as always. Good Job!