Great Chapter, loved it and the story, in fact, I loved the story so much, Im wondering, why is there no more chapters? Ill look around to see and I understand that this story was created a few years ago.

SKYYYYYYYRIIIIIIIIM!

Why are you spelling Granger's first name Hermoine? It's HerMIone! Hermione!

I would love it if Ed had a pairing... particularly, Roy-Ed. I don't CARE if it's extremely parental or romantic(romantic being it develops when Ed is like, fifteen/seventeen). I personally love both, because Roy shows concern/worry and love for Ed in both. I would love it if the pairing was romantic though. I can't seem to find enough Romantic Roy-Ed fics. But anyway, it would be best if you had Ed age a bit before that if you do choose this pairing. I would like for Roy to be young, about 22/23/24 years of age(it may not be cannon, whichever among them you choose(preferably the youngest) but we don't need Royou in his thirties by the time Ed is seventeen.

Nina was at least four years old. It says so in the Wiki.

Mustang he's so cute when he teases Ed.

You got them mixed up. Legilimency is the act of seeing a person's memories. Occlumency is blocking your mind off from an invader.

I really loved to read this story and there are so many things to still explain in this story! It's so sad you didn't update in 4 years. This could really be absolutely amazing if you continue it!

Uh, isn't Ron's wand also broken? Because that is one reason for others not to use his wand.
Remember the "eat slugs" incident? Yeah...

Um, how the HELL does Alphonse have which?! Why is this not expanded upon?! Or did I miss it somehow?!

Awesome chapter

You use the word "um" too much. It makes it feel to rushed.

There are three chasers.

Don't leave me hanging here! PLEASE UPDATE!
#Ed'sAShortySoCallMeSteelOrHe'llGrowTaller XP

It's actually Legimamacy that invades the mind (I think that's how it's spelled) and Occluemency blocks it.