this will all hit her later like delayed reaction. would be nice to read about that and how Vegeta will react. but this is good by itself too.

I love your stories (especially Fight to survive) and your writing style.
I've read "Silent her with my tongue" by Rev Kurame (1st place on admira 'Shakespeare' contest).
I was thinking if you can read and get some inspiration for another of your story. That Bulma and Vegeta characters are very interesting...
And, thank you for your hard work

Good story!

This is surprisingly well written. At first i thought it was going to be one of those stupid rape stories but it was good. I really love your Vegata and Bulma. :)

Omg! You wrote it! Fit it right in!

Hi,

1st of all I would like to thank you for such a good and creative story, I really liked and I wonder if could I have your permission of translating into Spanish? and posted here in Fanfiction.

Thanks

I love this one-shot! i simply cant tell you the number of times I've read again and again. I would love read an aftermath to this piece. i'm curious to see how Bulma and Vegeta react to each other now after this encounter when they find themselves back on Earth.

Somehow, that last statement was more like "Vegeta came with sperms, took my virginity and left with a part of my heart." :))))

Nice little snlpet of lemon!

I just wanted to say I really enjoyed your story !

I love it!

Abridged. Hands down, no questions asked... loved it! xp Best one shot I've ever read. this is so on my favorite list!

Fantastic one shot! Very well written and I just loved their interaction.

DBZA lol! I loved it, it was a great one shot!

I have a feeling this beginning was inspired by DBZ Abridged. xD