please update love the story

did you use legplas greenleaf from lord of the rings and hobbit

So i had hope as there was yuri memtioned so i waited until he was read out as a boy in hid parents will add to that moony/sirius/snape triangle and mentions of rape and i am out like for fuck sake after being raped by his uncle he is going to be gay? I think you read too much gay porn. Not emntioning the obvious hint at draco/harry parring which is the most disgusting parring with few expections like voldy/harry or dumbledorr/harry

I love this story, Maybe you should read a fanfiction called Arcane Academy. The beginning has abuse by the Dursleys, but the ending part is very similar to this story.

I think you could benefit from a beta. Your sentence structure needs some work.
Your Harry isn't likable at all.

this is great wish there was more

I love what you have written so far. I hope you're able to update soon even if it's been several years.

Keep writing

Hello xD I'd like to read the next chapter one day, as I find this fiction quite fabulous x)

I really love your story. For the Harem could there be Luna, Neville, Blaise, Draco, Theodore, Tonks, Fleur, and the Weasley Twins

Draken

I'm loving the fic but the grammar is exceptionally bad. Do you not know how to spell? Most of it isn't too bad, but honestly. How hard is it to remember that "Shock" has a 'C', not two 'O's, otherwise the word is 'shook' which is nowhere near grammatically correct. I might just cry if I have to read about one more character stepping back in "shook"

Update please!

Please continue the story. It is sooooo goooooooooooood.

Moooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please please please please please please please please please please please

I enjoy reading your story and hope you will post soon. I am particularly intrigued on what will become of Mike and Julius. For Julius it's mainly curiosity if the elves will take action against the kitsunes. With his parents actions it could be construed they do not care their son attempted murder on the prince of the blood and royal elves. Murder may not have been intended, I'm not sure from the reading, but I have family who suffer from asthma so I know the dangers. I also have protective family so I know how they would react. Not to mention Ria is their direct heir. Also, I am curious if the goblins would get involved. They seem very friendly with Ria and I can't imagine they would appreciate the kitsune's actions either. As for Mike it's mainly a question on if he remains friendly with Ria or if the mention of putting submissives in their places would have him turn into an antagonist. Speaking of which I wonder how Lupin and Snape would react to McGonagalls and Pomfrey's actions in Ria's memories. Or will Ria hide it from them? Please update soon, I look forward to seeing what will happen next.