That was entertaining, I enjoyed it! I'm really tired but I wanted to finish anyway lol. You're good at writing FFVIII universe. I thought characterization was good overall especially Seifer I liked, but Squall was a bit too soft and timid and angsty to be realistic. That's kind of the main plot point though that he's afraid of Seifer, so hard to change I guess? Haha :)

I liked how they both explored with their touches, testing out the waters. Good read!

That was brilaint omg. I loved that story.

uuh, that was enjoyable, to say the least of it ;)
I love your interpretation of Seifer, it fits him perfectly. I don't have to tell you that the lemon scene was great, you already know that, I'm sure. It's a great fic and has a nice impact.

Angsty but good! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Moral of the story :
1. Squall's life been pathetic. But as emotionless he was, he survived.
2. Seifer was a tough guy. Though he missed half of his life that was Squall, but he managed to stay strong and never gave up in pursue of his Squall.
3. Uh, would it make sense if they didn't realize how they needed each other in private level in this story? Or, it's just my wish...
4. Maybe you could give some hint what happened with them after the night? Er...wait, in the end it sounded like they weren't really into each other emotionally, or it's just me?
5. It would be super great if you made Squall miserable because of Seifer loss, and he just didn't realize it. (maybe in next fic then?)
Hey, dear author, thank-you for writing SeiferxSquall. I thought nobody would want to write this perfect pairing (in English, M rating) no more (ToT)
*permission to hug author*

Really good stuff. I like the setup and combination of Seifer/Squall and the concept of moving on.

That was way more exciting than I thought! Can I beg for more SxS? :D

I'm not very good with critics so all I can say is, well done. I thought it was very good. I hope you plan to write more )