great work. i can't wait for the next chapter.

very good chapter thanks for your work

good work. and damnit. i hoped they could protect aina.

good work. i can't wait for the next chapter.

i wonder who is the masked person. really good work. i can't wait for the next chapter.

interesting work. i can't wait for the next chapter.

rest in peace Stan lee

Not gonna lie, I loved the first few ch. But after wave it drops of a cliff and dies for me.

The whole chunin ark feels one-dimensional, stuff just happens, until more stuff happens. Than we have a bunch of addet drama, that I don't believe was needed and feels out off place.
The story is not realy bad or anything but not my cup of tea, to much extra drama and characters that act like the are bipolar for my taste.

great work. i can't wait for the next chapter.

thanks for the new chapter love this story thanks

Well isn't hinata a little voyeur, foreign shinobi that are most likely being watched by anbu, a girl with the byakugan saying let's fuck on the roof, interesting

I find that it is rather easy to read without pictuation, pretty much all I can think of is maybe look for a beta reader, if you look around you can usually find someone willing to do so on one of the many discord servers the authors of ao3 are a part of. All in all my only complaint/question is how do you and naruto know each other? Other than that I have no real complaints, other than the occasional spelling error, or things that I don't like( I'm picky as he'll and it comes to jutsu names) I can find no fault in this, so keep up the good work!

nice work. i can't wait for the next chapters.

good work. i can't wait for the next chapter.

RIP Z