I didn't really like how you introduced Sophia. Drunk, angry and screaming didn't give off a great first impression, nor does it really draw your readers in... I felt like there were way too many exclamation points during that entire first part. Even thoughts were given exclamations. You also shouldn't capitalize words when someone in yelling. It doesn't look good, and isn't necessary. Words being emphasized can be put in italics, but again, it shouldn't be done often or it becomes annoying to read.

Sophia's voice would have been exasperated, not exacerbated. Also, in the story description, you actually spelled Petrova wrong, which probably turns a lot of readers away before giving your story a chance at all.

I don't understand why John bothers trying to explain things to his drunk daughter/niece. Realistically, he would want to think things through and wait until morning to talk to Sophia when she's sober. Also, there was never any indication on the show that John was in contact with any witches. He knew about vampires, and was in contact with Isobel, but he likely wouldn't have a single clue what to do in that sort of situation. And why the hell wouldn't Sophia try talking to Bonnie since Bonnie would have already been talking about witch stuff?

How is Sophia randomly this powerful with only minor incidents in the past to even indicate supernatural powers? All of a sudden every strong emotion is triggering her witch powers when before it rarely happened?

I honestly wish you had introduced Sophia differently. You started this story so violently and it really throws the reader off. There's no introduction of the character, no insight, no nothing really. Just a drunk and screaming girl randomly throwing around powers who drops her life and moves away for training at the behest of her uncle. It happens way too fast, and has no proper foundation in which to build upon. After reading the first chapter, I just felt like my head was turned around, and I have no urge at all to continue the story. The only reason I will continue is because of how long the story is, and its sequel. I hope it gets better.

I love it! It was awesome, I love Sophia and I'm so happy that Jenna didn't died. Still piss of at Elena and the other for hating Klaus, I mean, OK, He can be bad but they could tried to understand him a little before calling him a monster. Can't wait to read the sequel and to see how Rebekah will reacted to Sophia! See you soon! 3

So much potential. Totally blew it. Disappointing...

Me encanto! Espero que sigas! Saludos desde Argentina!

I'm glad you continued it!I love your story so far!

Sophia is fucking pathetic. She just got strangled and the dumb bitch is smiling with him like a minute later.

I really like this story so far. Your style is very impressive. (I feel so happy to FINALLY find a well written VD story!) great story! I like your style, but I feel like this is getting too much of a filler. Klaus giving food to an orphanage? Dude, he threatened to murder his own personal hybrid kid. I doubt he'd actually be kind. tbh he'd probably kill Sophie by now because love is a weakness and yada yada. About the "I hate Klarolinerampage, I feel like Sophie is way more immature than Caroline. I am kinda sad that Klaroline didn't work out, because I feel like Stefan and Caroline were a pretty bad pair up; they had no chemistry.

I like it so far.

This is by far my favourite story. I've read both it and A Petrova Something, multiple times. Just thought I'd let you know how amazing I find it.

So.. is no one going to tell her how Damon raped Caroline?

I loved this story

I just finished reading this story! so so so wonderful. I loved the relationship between Sophia and Klaus. I loved their dialogue and how fleshed out everything was. great writing :)

I am SOO glad you found a way to keep Jenna alive. Oml

This story is amazing! I was not disappointed with the ritual scene at all! Thanks for writing!

i loved it klaus was always one of my fav characters between his looks and his accent he was amazing