So sweet!

This was very sweet. I like how you wrote Molly and Sherlock's various responses-very plausible, I think. Good job :)

Thoroughly enjoyed this. it's nice to see Sherlock miss something

cute!

Cute!

Awww! Very sweet! I think Sherlock must rub on off her at least a little. Nice story :)

That was great! We've seen Sherlock meting out his own brand of retribution in defense of those he cares about in SiB, so I think how he handled Rachel in your story was well within character.
Well done! I hope to read more Sherlock fics from you!

This oneshot is simply brilliant. Your characterizations are very well done in my opinion and the ending does not come off rushed to me, so you need not worry. I very much like the length of the piece and the detail. It seems like a very plausible way in which Sherlock and Molly's relationship could turn romantic. I commend you for your excellent command of language and your wonderful storytelling ability. Of all the Sherlolly oneshots I've read, this can be counted amongst the best.

Please continue the story. I like Sherlock trying to work out his response to Molly.

I truely like this.I love how you've changed Sherlock 'softened' him just enough. take care

I know the status says Complete, but is there any way you can be tempted to write more? This was brilliant! I love Molly getting all snarky and deductive on Sherlock's behalf (and Sherlock actually acknowledging it).

Great story. May the plot bunnies invade your life. :)

Loved this! Hope we get to read about their 8pm get together too.

really good fiction. reallybenjoyed it. very cute.

I'm completely in love with this fic!