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I really hope you come back to this story soon, it's amazing and really well written.

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Please update soon

I hope you update soon, I really like the story. Especially the relationship between Ling and Ellie.

Hello it's been a while, I hope you update soon.

Please update

Oooh my God this is soooo good. I hope you update soon!

Oh my god! Please update! I can’t handle the waiting! I really, really, really love this story that includes an OC sibling. Elena is such a good character! I even create some fanart of her design from my spare time! I really want this story to continue!

Nooooo! please update ~

noo.. please tell me there's more to this story then just this

Hello
I really love your story its one of my favorite stories
I hope you continue it soon
Also i really like ling x elena :)

Hello Again! Sorry, Not to rush or bother you,but are still going to finish this story? Because it's by far one of my favorite Fullmetal Alchemist Fanfiction of all time! I Love the character development and Story you have written so far. I really hope we get more chapters with Elena and Mustang bonding, since I really feel like they have a interesting relationship. First time they meet, Elena was fading fast,but Mustang brought a little light back to her eyes with the hope that they can get her brothers's bodies back.

We flash forward again when they meet in Central, She seems kind of in awe of the Colonel and is impressed by him. He ask her if she'd ever considered becoming a State Alchemist, Though I think he's mostly just trying to annoy Ed. Because becoming a State alchemist wouldn't really help her brothers besides maybe getting more research money and as He states later on she has kindness and innocence to her that would make it impossible. (Honestly though I would love for Elena,by the end of the story to become a State Alchemist under Mustang after the Promise Day, using Alkahestry to heal people,I just think it would be a good ending to her character Arc, but i bet what ever you have planed will awesome!) They can also tell when the other is lying, when Mustang lies about Hughes's death, She can see past his mask and notices something is immediately wrong and when Elena is seriously hurt he can see past her facade of being also have a lot in common to, They both hate being useless and when Elena Snaps at Scar it's was pretty similar to how later on Mustang will react to Envy.

With everything that happened with Lust, During and After they were all in the hospital, I think Mustang would gain a little for respect for her (also Guilt from burning her, which most likely brought back Ishval flashbacks) Though he seems to have a problem with telling her about Havoc. My guess is he knows how Ed blames himself for everything and is worried she picked up that trait. (side note Was He ticked when he found out Ed took her out of the Hospital, while she was STILL! recovering? Especialy since Ed has a bad Habit of Leaving Before he's fully healed himself.) Anyways i think Elena is going to try to get him to tell her the truth about Havoc "Equivalent Exchange!,I tell you what I know and you tell what you know!" We can get some banter between them,maybe some Sweet Parental moments what ever you like! I hope she shows him her notes on the homuncuil and tries to help find out who murder hughes. Maybe After he's done reading them,rips out the pages and Burns them since "It would be too dangerous to leave out for the Enemy find!" Anyways sorry if i'm making connections where there are none,it's just how it all came across to me and all the things i have suggested are entirely up to you, i'm sure what ever you come up with will amazing! Well anyways great story so far, sorry this was so long. Have a nice day.

Hi,It's been a while since I re-read this story, it's so amazing! possibly one of the best fma oc's fanfics I ever read! I really hope you continue soon. Since the next chapter is where they meet Pride/Selim, I loved it if he theartens her the same way he did Hawkeye, I think that would be really work with Pride's character. Also is it possible we could have a chapter, before they go up to brigs, where Elena goes to talk to Mustang about Hughes and ask him about what he was like? It could be like how when Riza Talked with Ed about the war in Ishval and it could tye in with the Special Yet Another Man's BattleField, only Mustang would most Likely leave the Ishval moments out if he told her,but it's really up to you, I'm sure anything you come up with will be Awesome! You're such a amazing writer and I'm really looking forward to the Next chapter, Until then have a good day!

I really hope you update soon, this story is getting really good! I came back to this story after a few months and still enjoy your writing style, the story just gets more intriguing. I hope your doing well in your life and know that you got a fan patiently waiting for your return :)