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Nice

This is wonderfully told and written. I loved it! Wonderful Job

I loved this so much, I could read it over and over again...

They have sex

This is an incredibly beautiful bit of lemony goodness...

*Sniffle* *bows to writer* Amazing story, loved it keep up the amazing writing. :)

OHMYGOSH I LOVE THIS STORY!

So good! So, so good! Peeta's dialogue is incredibly hot.

My favorite is when he said, "Not stopping." Oh, god. Decadent in every way :)

wow this story was good... it actually had substance :)

Not ashamed to say it, I sooo loved the sexy scenes. ;) Post more stuff soon.

:)

LOOOOOVE it

this is so good! I actually didnt think i'd like it... but I was in the mood... and OMFG! THIS IS SO FUCKING AMAZING! i dunno i just liked the sex... jk jk jk this is really cute!

AMAZING.