This was a sweet story!

I hardly ever feel bad for Edward but what bella and Carlisle did to him was fucked up. That poor guy is gonna need major therapy. I

I’m sorry it’s cruel and ridiculous for Carlisle to want Bella to date Edward at the Same time as going out with him! AND then announcing it all at the wedding ceremony! I was enjoying it until Carlisle wanted Bella to get back together with Edward!

I liked this story a lot. Good story.

Loved this story! I have to say it frustrated me at times, when Carlisle and Bella were apart like when Carlisle wanted her to get back together with Edward, then wanted her to accept Edwards marriage proposal. When she should have said made me stop reading it, but glad I did. It was a beautiful story, well written with passion, loved it!

:)

That was quite the ride. Lots of smiles and happy times, but man were there a lot of difficulties they had to go through, including Carlisle's own crazy ideas. LOL Such as the idiocy of him wanting her to date Edward while still being with him. What was Carlisle thinking? He obviously didn't foresee his son finding out and ending up crushed. *shakes head*

I loved the Sam and Jasper bit for Alice. I also loved discovering that Alice secretly knew for so long because I kept thinking that they were sure to get caught. I guess they did, but we didn't find out until later. :D Jasper was such a good man for Alice.

I was so happy when Emmett forgave Bella, but also heartbroken for him after he confirmed her relationship with Carlisle. I'm glad he found love with Irina... although there was a point that it said Kate and I was royally confused, but it was Irina each time after that. LOL

Unfortunately with the enjoyable storyline, there was the issue with other things. IF you want me to explain further, PM me.

The only thing I would like to mention here is: Right away in chapter 1, you stated "They were only twenty-one when they had her, and twenty-two when they had Edward." and "Alice, who was two years older than Edward and I..." The problem for me was the consistency. After this, you claimed Carlisle to be 20 years older than Bella and then "It isn't just a little age gap. It's eighteen years.".

Throughout the story, it wasn't consistent. Such as this part "Logically speaking, if this lasted, she'd be a widow by the time she was thirty at the latest." So, Carlisle was going to die at 48 (going with the 20-year age gap, 50 for the 22-years, or 46 for the 18 years). How did I come up with this? Well, it was made very clear after their relationship was out in the open that Bella was the age of consent (which in most states is 18). If Carlisle is 20 years older, he was 38 when they met. Therefore, you only expect(ed) Carlisle to live 12 more years? With that in my mind, it means he should be dead in four years from now (since they met when Bella was 18 and they have been together for 8 years). YIKES!

No matter the issues I saw, I thoroughly enjoyed the storyline. Thank you for sharing this tale of Carlisle & Bella with us. :D

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Love this story so damn good :D

Loved it! Didn't think that Emmett and Bella would kiss!

Loved it! Wow!

Awe how sweet are they!

Loved it! They're so cute!

Yikes! Poor Bella!

Awe poor Carlisle! I can't believe that Esme would do that to him and her kids! Good thing that they have Bella!