Such a good job in this story! Would love to see more one day!

khow that was some smut.

I like how worried Jean was and how her instinctual rejection of what is going on with Logan and Marie is so in character. Damn, what a situation to be in.

Logan's chapter was the one I liked the most. He tries so hard to give Marie information and get her informed consent on them being a them. He's even ready to get and run the hell in the opposite direction if she told him to. I have to say that is the part I like best. He may be feral but he isn't a monster.

I'm glad for Marie that she has control of her mutation.

Please update

That was lovely! I loved the fact that Logan gave her the option, he didn't just take for grated that she still wanted him, but how could she not want that gorgeous hunk of man!

What an interesting premise! To show the start of Logan and Marie's through someone else's eyes! How original. And to use Jean was quite nice. I get what you're saying about Jean not being the "bad guy" in this instance, but she sure is being dumb! All-in-all, I like the story so far! I cannot wait see what Logan is going to want to say to Jean and Scott tomorrow morning!

I would love to see more. It would be great if you continued this and showed us everyone's reaction to the new pair. And to see if Jean made it through her encounter unscathed.

Great job and more please!

I really like the start of this and I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can.
Tanya

Wow. I LOVE this fic. WONDERFUL job! The way you portrayed Logans feral-mind-set and Jeans conflictions were/are absolutely AWESOME!

More please

Oh dear.
I must admit, I'm a little sucker for feral instincts. I like your writing style and all I can do or say is, bravo! Bravo for using the little details. I like. Another!

Loved it! Well written and not fluffy. Update soon- interested to see the fallout!

Please continue. Love to see how their bond works out.

I've become pretty pessimistic on finding Rogan stories that capture me quickly. This one did. I almost clicked away at the first person in chapter one but I'm glad I didn't. Your characters are written very well and true to their natures. I like that Jean wasn't a raving bitch- simply concerned for Marie and the students. Your Logan was written so well. The torment of wanting Marie yet needing to Procter her came across very well.

Your dialogue is written well too, which is not an easy fear with both Logan and Marie's unique accents.

Well done- looking forward to reading more.

I really hope you continue this story! I LOVE it! Update soon please! :3

I loved it. There is no way you can stop now! It was beautifully written and I was really sceptical about your Jean-point of view, but it turned out fantastic!