Reviews for The First Bite
hervissa chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
This is wonderful and brilliant and oh Merlin SO FULL OF RUMBELLE I JUST CAN'T :3
Definitely going not only into my favourites, but into my Extra Special Fics folder ;)

I MEAN
YOU WRITE RUMPLE AND BELLE WITH A PUURRRRFECTION THAT I CAN MERELY STARE IN AWE AT
AND MY SHIPPING SOUL IS SOARING HIGH

I'm grinning like a maniac and I don't care.
YOU'VE JUST MADE MY DAY A THOUSAND TIMES BETTER
THANK YOU FOR THAT :3

RUMBELLE TODAY
RUMBELLE TOMORROW
RUMBELLE FOREVER

hervisssssa :)
Helpless in Love chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
Should make a sequel.
32nd freeze chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Was that a Firefly reference i spy?
aoowerojfh chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
OH MY GOODNESS!
Emma's last words, was like throwing a huge truck on my face.
Wow...seriously everyone, though unhappy, at least got a better deal, than staying in a prison for 28 years with not memory and no outside contact.
OH MY GOODNESS...that broke my heart. I never thought so much...and look at Belle, she was ready to let go everything, when Rumple decided to take revenge on Regina. Wow, she is the one with a heart of GOLD...wonderful...I must say. :)
HelplessRomantic chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Are you going to update? I hope you do.
Silver E. Sparrow chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
I think I'll just be re-reading all your stories. Yep that's what I will be doing :P. Swoony, swoony story this was xD. I loved Emma's reaction to walking in on Rumbelle, hilarious. She should consider herself lucky she didn't see anything more.
vinyl is better chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
This was wonderful! Sweet in the right parts and hilarious in others. I really admire your ear for the characters' own dialogue, for things that the actors would really be saying.

I wanna hug this fic and frame it on my wall.
boop-oop-ee-doo chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Great!
white raven chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
"Very willing," she assures her and Emma shudders "I'm Belle."

That's a pitch-perfect line.

Another lovely little short. You capture the magic between these two very well.
goldmin chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
"I spend years painstakingly arranging their love life and they cannot grant me ten bloody minutes to enjoy mine" This has got to be the single best line I have read in all of Rumbelle fan fiction! Every so often I have to re-read your story just for this line. Beautiful job!
Magnolie chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Awwww cute!
I love the moment where the Charmings come in - it's just so Emma xD
Nice Job ;) !
letmetellyouaboutmyfeels chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Was that a Firefly reference in the "special Hell" sentence? Or am I just seeing too much into things? In any case I loved this. Rather like the one you wrote about constantly being interrupted... heh heh. And you gotta love Emma's lack of tact.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
wow both tastefull and funny,a good story,could do w/out the swearing,great story none the less.
Cande chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
This is amazing and I love you. Ugh I really want the episode to go exactly like this.
dixiedelight270 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Omg! You have to continue this! It's amazing!
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