| Reviews for The First Bite |
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hervissa chapter 1 . 8/9/2014 This is wonderful and brilliant and oh Merlin SO FULL OF RUMBELLE I JUST CAN'T :3 Definitely going not only into my favourites, but into my Extra Special Fics folder ;) I MEAN YOU WRITE RUMPLE AND BELLE WITH A PUURRRRFECTION THAT I CAN MERELY STARE IN AWE AT AND MY SHIPPING SOUL IS SOARING HIGH I'm grinning like a maniac and I don't care. YOU'VE JUST MADE MY DAY A THOUSAND TIMES BETTER THANK YOU FOR THAT :3 RUMBELLE TODAY RUMBELLE TOMORROW RUMBELLE FOREVER hervisssssa :) |
Helpless in Love chapter 1 . 4/8/2014 Should make a sequel. |
32nd freeze chapter 1 . 3/21/2014 Was that a Firefly reference i spy? |
aoowerojfh chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 OH MY GOODNESS! Emma's last words, was like throwing a huge truck on my face. Wow...seriously everyone, though unhappy, at least got a better deal, than staying in a prison for 28 years with not memory and no outside contact. OH MY GOODNESS...that broke my heart. I never thought so much...and look at Belle, she was ready to let go everything, when Rumple decided to take revenge on Regina. Wow, she is the one with a heart of GOLD...wonderful...I must say. :) |
HelplessRomantic chapter 1 . 6/4/2013 Are you going to update? I hope you do. |
Silver E. Sparrow chapter 1 . 12/7/2012 I think I'll just be re-reading all your stories. Yep that's what I will be doing :P. Swoony, swoony story this was xD. I loved Emma's reaction to walking in on Rumbelle, hilarious. She should consider herself lucky she didn't see anything more. |
vinyl is better chapter 1 . 11/25/2012 This was wonderful! Sweet in the right parts and hilarious in others. I really admire your ear for the characters' own dialogue, for things that the actors would really be saying. I wanna hug this fic and frame it on my wall. |
boop-oop-ee-doo chapter 1 . 10/25/2012 Great! |
white raven chapter 1 . 10/24/2012 "Very willing," she assures her and Emma shudders "I'm Belle." That's a pitch-perfect line. Another lovely little short. You capture the magic between these two very well. |
goldmin chapter 1 . 10/21/2012 "I spend years painstakingly arranging their love life and they cannot grant me ten bloody minutes to enjoy mine" This has got to be the single best line I have read in all of Rumbelle fan fiction! Every so often I have to re-read your story just for this line. Beautiful job! |
Magnolie chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 Awwww cute! I love the moment where the Charmings come in - it's just so Emma xD Nice Job ;) ! |
letmetellyouaboutmyfeels chapter 1 . 10/9/2012 Was that a Firefly reference in the "special Hell" sentence? Or am I just seeing too much into things? In any case I loved this. Rather like the one you wrote about constantly being interrupted... heh heh. And you gotta love Emma's lack of tact. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2012 wow both tastefull and funny,a good story,could do w/out the swearing,great story none the less. |
Cande chapter 1 . 9/24/2012 This is amazing and I love you. Ugh I really want the episode to go exactly like this. |
dixiedelight270 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012 Omg! You have to continue this! It's amazing! |