I LOVE JASON AND REYNA

Awesome detail! But, you have to follow the original story, you think Piper would be like that? Overall rating: 4.3/5.

Cool story, but I think that Piper's nickname for Jason is Sparky. Could you write a Jasper story?
*Jasper for life*

Aphrodite (AKA Rick) has to get to work on this. Jeyna needs to be official.

Piper's name for Jason is sparky. PIPERS! Ok. NOT Reyna's! PIPERS. u and I both know that it wouldn't happen. Jasper is sooooooo much better. Reyna is over confident, ugly and is exactly like one of those popular mean girls with 50 layers of make up plastered on their faces. Piper is sweet and caring. Something rayna will never be. Jasper fans rule

Oh. My. Gosh. I don't know how I've never seen this story before even though I've looked at your stories quite a few times, but this is amazing! iloveitiloveitiloveit it's so cute 'n sweet 'n fluffay 'n awesome 'n adorable 'n omg I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! Seriously, it's really good:)and yes I did purposely spell fluffy that way

EXCUSE ME? It's Jasper which is better! Reyna sucks! She so show-off-y and over confident!

It was pretty cool. I liked it.

Please remember to use punctuation.

-Elisabeth daughter of Hecate.

I liked the starting but the ending was kinda fast doncha think?

1. Everyone was OOC.
2. Grammar!
3. *insert squeal here* JAYNA!
4. Even though I don't like her, I don't think that Jason would push Piper or that Piper would be so...mean.
5. CRUCIO! *cackles* It's good to be Bellatrix aka me.
XD
-A very evil and proud Selene Bellatrix Black

I guess it was kinda cute (don't ship it,but it was sweet) Anyways everyone was little (maybe very) OOC

So sweet

Great job!

AAWWWW! Thats beautiful! Great story and very well written except Reyna's a little ooc. Still, great plot idea! I hope to see more from you!