Your story was good up until the last chapters. Yes, they had their HEA but the ending felt rushed compared to the rest of the story. It was a bit of a letdown. More details and descriptions would help. We never figured out what happened with Ron besides the fact that he was caught, we know nothing of her parents, Harry, Lucius...way too many holes to consider properly finished.

Woot marriages! Haha

I love Sliding Doors, so I was def interested to see how you did this. I was quite pleased with how you used the split time concept :3

Tori

Sliding Doors is one of my favourites.

I presume Hermione has her wand with her. Why doesn't she put up a fight instead of trying to escape in shoes she can't possibly run in?

Gorgeous story, absolutely enjoyed it.

Loving the story so far! Complex, yet well-articulated. :)

Just want to let you know how sweet this story turned out. I live the epilogue, but I would have liked to know what happened after the other Hermione died. Would Ron mourn? Or would he even notice? That kind of thing. It was very well written though, don't let anyone tell you any differently. Keep up the good work.

I wasn't sure about this story at first and the first few paragraphs had me a little confused but thank goddess i read on as i really enjoyed it! I love the fact that you made such a tiny thing as a broken heel into something much bigger and it is very well written! loving it!

Love it so far :)

Loving this fic, but I prefer the other half much more.

Interesting

Sliding Doors and Run Lola Run are two of my favorite movies, so when I saw you were spinning your story off of them I was very excited. Can't wait to see what you do with this idea :)

Alu