nice story cant wai for the next chapters

This is interesting! Why won't you continue? It might be a but tedious bec you have to research but I hope you'd be able to find time to finish this :)

hey this is a great fic... but I have a question if you don't mind... are you still working on it?

Ta-da! Zack is here! great story. I'm so excited for the next chapter

LOVE the banter and the mystery! Can't wait to see what's in store next for Cloud and Tifa! :)

Awesome ! This is a really intriguing fic :D
Update soon :)

UPDATE :)
This was amazing for a prologue (?) :"DDD

Poor Barrett needs to pick better partners. Jeesh! You're on a crime spree and your partner can't stick to the crime at hand... Looking forward to more!

Sigh. shakes head and grins Cloud - thief (part-time kidnapper of beautiful women) extraordinaire.

Sorry. Couldn't keep myself from making that statement. I especially loved him snapping at Barret with "I told you to shut up!" grins again

This seems like a pretty promising fic. Grammar is good, nice overall lighthearted tone and underlying mystery. Keep going!

I love it! Totally love it! Was the theif cloud? It was wasn't it? Please update I love the cloudXtifa pairing.

Love the start of this. It looks like it's going to be really interesting. Hope to see more soon! :)

Really interesting story! I can't wait to read more! :D