This is amazing

Why did this have to end :(

Thank you for this piece. I love Ron and Hermione, and your Bill is so amazing. The perfect story.

that was lovely

Beautiful

I'm simply cheering on this story ... amazing, touching, passionate ... thank you so much for writing such a good interaction between siblings ... the thoughts on the bill were as incredible as from a brother who is proud of another, whether by the courage or the maturing of the younger brother ... I will read all your other stories ... thanks for writing

This story is so well written! Simply amazing

I'm speechless. This story is so good. Bill is one of my all time favoutites and you write him so well. I think this story really worked having it from his perspective rather than Ron's. It showed us a different look at an already familiar couple. Beautiful.

This is the first story about how Ron and Hermione are coping with the effects of Malfoy Manner that isn't from their points of view. I really like that Bill is seeing Ron as an adult and not a baby brother. He understands what is happening between the two, even if they aren't quite yet willing to admit it to each other. Nicely done.

Just beatiful. I love the brotherly feel.

I actually really love this. For some reason Bill acting a big brother is so pleasing. Love the brotherly connection and Ron's obvious devotion to Hermiome.

That was really beautiful

interesting POV but so perfect for the point of your story. I really loved how you used Bill's perspective to narrate the lives of the others.

I know this is from 5 years ago now, but I just had to review because it's beautiful. Utterly beautiful. I was smiling and holding my hand over my heart the entire time I read it. Well done on an amazing piece of work!

I know you wrote this story a long time ago, but I just found it today. All I can say is "damn". It is one hell of a one shot, perhaps the best I have ever read.