| Reviews for The Rookie |
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   blondferretgirl chapter 15 . 6/10 Love It! |
| Kath Potter Cullen-H.T chapter 15 . 9/16/2019 Such I yum story |
| Marymary123 chapter 15 . 8/29/2019 Good story. thanks |
| jeangary28 chapter 1 . 5/22/2019 interesting start |
| Justchillingandliving chapter 15 . 12/13/2018 What a cute deep short story. Something tells me that Edward will follow Bella where she goes |
| SaltWaterSwimmer29 chapter 15 . 8/26/2018 Nice open-ended ending. I wonder what happened to them after this! |
| jane-with-a-y chapter 15 . 8/2/2018 Hey Kris, This is me, janewithay. Remember that time when I told you that my 86 year old mother was reading this little story and how she was in fact, almost 87, and didn't know if she'd live long enough for you to finish updating this here lil fic, and you went ahead and published a chappie early on her behalf? Well ... She's 94 now and is still waiting for an epilogue, js. lol ... love this story! xo Jayne |
| tee4dree chapter 15 . 1/22/2018 The way you write Edward’s feelings is so beautiful and hot! Thank you very much for this lovely story! |
| BishPlease23 chapter 15 . 9/25/2017 Will you be doing a sequel for this story? |
| ObsidianDraconis chapter 15 . 6/9/2017 not fair! what did she decide? i know i know "life's not fair" |
| ObsidianDraconis chapter 13 . 6/9/2017 well it could have been worse. lol |
| ObsidianDraconis chapter 10 . 6/9/2017 omg i think i'm going to have trouble ending my laughter at this chapter. the images in my mind man. |
| ObsidianDraconis chapter 4 . 6/4/2017 charlie: how on earth did my frame get broken? edward: oh um well... i may have kissed your daughter. i envision a lot of blinking and fearfully looking at charlie's service weapon. lol |
| ObsidianDraconis chapter 1 . 6/4/2017 hopes that she's 18. lol |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2017 I never liked Twilight because it is not a love story. It is only a story that romanticizes abusive and unhealthy relationships... It is a story about Mary Sue and Gary Stu and if you are paying attention they are both actually very selfish and unlikable people because they are too idealized. The only decent character was Jacob, until he transformed into Gary Stu in the last book. Nice story anyways... :) |
