I ready this a while ago, but I thought I'd give you an official review since I read it again :) I really liked it! It was so real and just normal. Normal couple interactions. And I loved the last few words-he'd marry her some day. I can practically hear Sawyer thinking it! Good job :D

Loved this. I don't think that you portrayed Sawyer as too soft. Glad he was the first to say "I love you". The only thing I would change would be to have her call him James. She always did, she only called him "Sawyer" when talking with others about him...(newly obsessed fan). I really did enjoy this story, though!

It's ok to write Sawyer a little softer - it's Juliet, she makes me all mushy too :D And she always did have a pacifying effect on him...whether through soothing words or a good old fashioned taser!

The observations about their comfort and happiness just from being around each other were sweet, and the descriptions of the sex had the detail that makes it hot while still maintaining the romantic tone - such a good combination! Thanks for sharing this one, be proud of it!