THE PERSON IS CARL WHEEZER! Who else would wanna blackmail him, and who else was there in the alley. I'm calling it.

I've been waiting soooooooooooooooo long for someone to write this type of story!

By far the best fanfiction of Jimmy neutron ...I was amazed how it was well written. I felt like I was reading the actual script from the show ..I can see this as in episode for season 4 ..I be looking forward for sequel

This story was amazing. You have to write a sequel. Thanks for writing, good luck!

Please make a sequel!

I really enjoyed this story. Anyway i hope you come out with a sequel or something. This was a terrific story.

I really like that you mention the events of the League of Villains, making the story feel more in canon the series, but overall great ending. I really enjoy it. Keep it up.

Please continue the story it is very good I want to know how it ends

"Hey Miki, you're so so icky, just the thought of being around you makes me oh so sicky."

I like the reference, I could tell right from the "twerp" xD

Continue please? #

Ohh please make some more Libby/Sheen romantic moments... :( By the way, the story rocks! :D

Hey, I've been reading your story and I'm here to give my honest opinion on it as a whole. Now this is just my opinion, alright. Okay, let me just say that it is well written and I really do like the story as it is.

One of my major problems with it is I believed you made it so that the League of Villains never existed because we all know that Eustace, Beautiful Gorgeous, and Roxy were stuck in the prehistoric and it was never mention of what happen to them or any of the other League of Villains. I also don't like what you did with the Sally character by making her evil like Eustace just because Jimmy rejected her. And I didn't care much about the time Jimmy and Cindy were underwater where they meet the mermaids. Not that it was bad it's just that I didn't care about it that much and it does kind of feel superfluous, at the same time I could understand why it was their, it was just the mermaid concept that kind of got me off.

Okay, I know I came off negative, so here is what I overall like about it. First off I have to say that I like really how everyone aside from Sally, stayed in character, for this is probably the only few times I ever read a Fanfic where everyone was in character. I also really like how you made Cindy's mother Sasha more likeable as the story goes along and made her care more about her daughter than seeing her as just some prize to be possessed. I also like how Elke return officially stayed in Retroville that way Carl won't feel left out as well as Goddard getting a chance to see Roxy again. Speaking of Goddard, I really do like the fact that he and Humphrey are now friends since both Jimmy and Cindy are officially boyfriend and girlfriend.

Overall, this is really good and I hope you update soon. This is probably one of the best Fanfics I've read. Aside from the fact that it ignored the League of Villains storyline, but it does feel like a follow up after the series finale, for everyone was in character and it does quite stay true to it's tone of the series though it does get quite dark and emotional at times which is fine.

Well done with the emotional, backstabbing, cold shoulder, angry, intense , alls well that ends well CHAPTER. The way libby gave cindy the cold shoulder was hilarious. Update soon,

FLAMES
The time you take to update must be very hard, for most readers except me! People usually get annoyed when you take too long to update! But I will always be there in the end.

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That WAS pretty rude of Libby, giving Cindy the cold shoulder like that, but I'm so glad they made up and decided to be friends again! ! So sweet! ! !

Yay, Graystar doesn't have writer's block anymore, and that girl Miki deserves it, after all the mean things she's done over the years! What a total DORK! ! ! Nice connection to the FOP song Icky Vicky, btw! Brilliant! !

.ww(I put periods there so F.F wouldn't stupidly block it, argh...), Goddard's taking Roxy to the dance! How adorable! ! Poor Brobot, though... heheh

All in all, totally awesome chapter, and I'm eager to find out what's next! ! ! ! :D

Thanks for updating

Good chapter update soon