This story was amazing. It was very well written and I absolutely loved it. You should do a sequel. Thanks for sharing.

WAIT IS THERE MORE TO THIS STORY?! I AM SHOCKED. MY JAW DROPPED WHEN I GOT TO THE END!

1. HELL YES, to this entire chapter.

2. Fury is going to be fucking PISSED.

3. Hahahahaha...

4. I like to imagine Odin glancing around the room a few minutes later, and catching sight of Jess taking a bite out of a very familiar-looking apple...

5. All in all, a good story. At times your OC was a little meeker than I'd prefer - I kept wishing she'd call Loki on his bullshit. Like: dude, you are a total stranger bleeding out on MY friend's couch. I owe you exactly nothing. You do NOT get to insult me right now. Oh? You think you're so much better than me? Well, in that case, have fun cleaning your own damn wound, motherfu-

...But then, I'm kind of a sassy bitch.
So.

I would love to read more of this story! I wish you would write a sequel! love the characters and their interactions. Your writing is wonderful too

You got Loki to be in-character and like a mortal, and Jess wasn't a Mary-sue! How'd
You do that? Awesome story

OMG THIS IS PERFECT I AM LITERALLY SCREAMING RIGHT NOW IN SILENCE AND IT'S 3 AM! I don't know from where I can start, this story is perfect in every way - plot, character development, dialogues - and it's literally one of a kind. I know that this probably won't get a sequel, since a perfect ending such as this completes the story entirely, but if you ever decided to continue it, I'd be there to R&R! Congrats!

Okay just saw the world Mayan and this is completely and totally off topic but my best friends name is Maya (my-ah) and she gets pissed because everyone says her name like it's spelled (may-ah). So I feel the need to point out her name Maya came from the word Mayan (my-an) so technically her name is the one spelled correctly.

Wow! This is extraordinarily well-written! I can't wait to see what comes of this! I like how you incorporated the movie into it, very clever.

Argh I want a sequel so bad x.x

write a sequel!

Brilliant Story, Very well written.

Please, please, please, PLEASE write a sequel! I'm begging you! Picture a blonde girl on her knees begging for a sequel, and that's me. This cliffhanger is eating at my soul.

Lovely story. I agree that Loki is not all bad, but I love that he can't help the mischievousness within himself.

That was a beautiful ending and I loved how you wrapped it up without QUITE ending it. This is the sort of story that doesn't REALLY end... It just stops being told. I over it, thank you for writing.

Prongs

Thank you for sharing this entertaining story, I enjoyed reading it very much.

Although I dare say, making Loki king only months after his trial not only caught everyone (including me) off guard, I also think it is rather a far stretch. With a bit more time between these two events, it'd seem more credible to me.

That said, I liked the ending, especially that way of probably-pairing-them-up-or-maybe-he-just-plays-a-little fits nicely.

Oh, and was it just me or did the Curse of the Caribbean theme strike up after the last scene? ;)