That...was fucking beautiful. And the way you incorporated the Davekat ship as well was awesome and it made it all the better. I don't think I've found a better DavexJohn fic yet. Dang.

oH MY GOD ITS OVER IT CANT BE OVER THIS IS TH STORY OK W O W

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This was so perfect and painful and sweet and beautiful that the world around me melted away as I immersed myself in this. Oh my God, you are so damn talanted and moving. Usually stories this long don't hold my interest because I start to feel like It's drawn out but I never had a problem with that while reading this. It was so perfectly paced and worded that I didn't even feel that longing you sometimes get after reading something. Instead, I was overwhelmed with this beautiful sense of peace, inspiration, and relief. You are so talanted and I hope that you can continue your original stories and publish them so I can read those as well. Have a magnificent life. And thank you so much for writing this.

WOW...couldn't stop reading once I started!
That was such a beautiful story.
Thanks for taking your time and leaving such an amazing piece 3
You're the best o

Oh god. This story... I have truly never read something this beautiful. Like, oh my god. My heart is currently bursting with joy and love for this piece.

Dave's constant description of his feelings never felt frantic nor did they focus too much on how much he loved John. It was all so perfect. Dave painfully pretending to be the best bro he can be, while feeling tortured by his love for John. I fell in love with Dave, I felt his feelings. I fell in love with John through Dave. His anxiety and pain became my own. When John betrayed him, I felt the betrayal in Dave. I felt horrified. I wanted to cry with Dave. And the fear and anxiety he experienced when Eridan found him. When he demanded to be taken to John. When he got to John. I fell in love with every part of this story.

I truly wish I had more helpful words to give about this story, but the best I can give is that not many stories bring me into them as well as this did to me. I felt like I was Dave, feeling everything he felt and it was beautiful. And instead of anger and frustration that it ended, I felt satisfied and fulfilled. Their 'Happily Ever After' is the most genuine love I've ever seen.

*swoon* I loved reading this.
/10 Would read for the rest of my days

Absolutely amazing job- and seeing as it's past four-thirty in the morning I think we can safely assume that this story snagged my attention from beginning to end, not letting go until the final, "I love you, John." Which may or may not have sent me into a mini fangirl coma from over-exposure to too many feel-twisting in such little time, i.e. one night.
My feels are too worn out right now to even think in complete sentences let alone write one properly, so I apologize in advance if the rest this review doesn't even come close to making any sense! (Hell, I don't think it ever made sense in the first place... xD)

I laughed so hard I snorted at some points, almost overdosed on fluff at others, bawled my eyes out to a red spotty mess through most parts leading up to the ending- some of it from the joy of them making up (the other part from the bit before that...), and through most of the later chapters cursing that blue-brainwashing-ho for messing with John's head like that. Seriously. She has to be the crowned heir of all bitches for trying to pull off all that shit. UGH JUST THINKING ABOUT IT MAKES ME ANGRY ARRRRRRRG- I mean, heh heh, TOTALLY over that yeah bit, yeah...

Anywho, I really don't mind the fluff diabetes- it's SO totally worth it! ; w ;
((asdfghjkl; I'm sorry, how the frig did this get so long so fast?!))

Okay, two things-
1; THIS IS FRIGGIN AMAZING I LOVE IT JUST ASDFGHJKL (/ )
and
2; Right when they started kissing for reals, Always by Blink 182 came on and it was just... cosmic.

I... I just read through this all in one night. I laughed so hard I snorted, I cried a little, and I shouted, 'You psychic manipulating bitch!' at my computer. This earned a place in my favorite stories, and you earned a spot as a favorite author.

No okay but this was reALLY REALLY AMAZING OKAY! 3 God, I loved this so much! If I had been sitting in a chair and not laying on my bed while reading this, I would have been on the EDGE OF MY SEAT. This was so fantastic and so well written and don't put yourself down because YOU ARE AMAZING! 333333 Damn. That's all I have to say. DDAAAAAYYYYUUUUMMM fucking great story man.

this story is so sweet i cant read it a second time without jumping in my chair fangirling i tried but fail cause i remeber every single detail

First things first.

You are truly a gifted storyteller. It has been quite some time since I've been this immersed in a fanfiction, and not one has brought such wide emotional depth as this story did. The love between Dave and John is truly the epitome of what love should be and you displayed it not callously, as some other writers tend to do, but with the respect that true love always deserves. Kudos, man.

Secondly.

I have never seen an fanfiction author to so far to preserve the personalities of the original characters as much as you did. The amount love and detail that must have went into that is astonishing. Dave is easily one of my most favorite characters of all time, so it makes me really happy to see his character so well fleshed out. Thank you for that.

In short, your story kicks ass and I very much look forward to reading another beautiful story from you in the future. :D

I like it!

This is the most beautifully-written fanfic I have ever read. Thank you for a amazing read :')

Several days ago, I read Strider's Edge. I'm not sure if you're familiar with it, but it is a truly heart-wrenching fanfiction. For two days I would start crying at unfortunate moments when I thought of it. I'm not sure if you've ever done it, but explaining to your teacher that you're crying over the death of fictional characters isn't exactly the most appealing thing.
Two days of this, and I decide I've had enough. Thus begins the healing process; I get a pint of ice cream and find the longest DaveJohn fluff I can find, which is this work of art. I spent all day reading this.
There were moments when I thought, why the hell did I think this was a good idea? How can this have a happy ending? But they pulled through, and so did my emotions. The last chapter had me in tears, which makes this story the first ever to make me cry for joy.
In conclusion, you helped pull me through a very traumatic experience with this absolutely beautiful story, and I shall forever be in your debt.
Bless your fuckin' soul.
-Cumberbitchin